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What do you think of my music?

JenniferM's Avatar JenniferM12/19/11 8:49 pm
12/21/2011 10:06 am
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Here's one of my tracks (and you can find more by clicking my name):

http://soundcloud.com/jenniferpedersen/ ... -replicant

honest opinions only please!
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12/21/2011 1:20 am
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Po1ntBlank
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good job, listen to panhead, he knows his stuff
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12/21/2011 1:02 am
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BusyChris
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It feels like _______________________________________________________ so that's some way's you can fix it , but to tell you the truth _____________________ you can do that with some programs.
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12/21/2011 12:56 am
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trouvel
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Not really my style (I'm more of the artistic classical type) but it definitely sounds professional and good for its genre. Thumbs up I'm trying to be as fair as I can with my genre preferences, if anything I want you to keep it up
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12/21/2011 10:06 am
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JenniferM
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thank you! i will certainly never give up making music cause it's alot of fun (also very frustrating at times)

BusyChrisIt feels like _______________________________________________________ so that's some way's you can fix it , but to tell you the truth _____________________ you can do that with some programs.


uhm? seriously... what? xD

Po1ntBlankgood job, listen to panhead, he knows his stuff


thanks! there is always something new to learn and i'll take any advice i can get.
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12/20/2011 6:20 pm
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Eatoncheese
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i finished like a day or 2 ago sorry for late reply it was good.
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12/21/2011 12:29 am
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JenniferM
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yeah that usually happens to me :p thank you!
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12/19/2011 9:30 pm
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JenniferM
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panhead86Autotune is by no means cheating! ALL the pros use it, no matter how good the singer is.

Yup, this is definitely techno.

And if you don't know what LFO's or Highpasses or Lowpasses are, just research automatic filters and play around with those. They can really add depth to a song.

Also, just out of curiosity, what do you use to make your music?


well it's a matter of opinion, i just don't like autotune at all. i think it's a bit overused too.

i am using Reason.
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12/19/2011 9:24 pm
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panhead86
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Autotune is by no means cheating! ALL the pros use it, no matter how good the singer is.

Yup, this is definitely techno.

And if you don't know what LFO's or Highpasses or Lowpasses are, just research automatic filters and play around with those. They can really add depth to a song.

Also, just out of curiosity, what do you use to make your music?

JenniferM
ZaphodXJust use an acapella of some good vocals that would go with it. Also if you autotune your voice it will sound fine.


have you actually tried that yourself? and i will NEVER use autotune! that's cheating.

Eatoncheesenice ima lisnin to it right now


cool, lemme know when ya done!

panhead86As far as techno goes, this is really good!! Love the beat, it's really well made. Had to listen to it twice, it's great!

And now if I'm being picky, here's the critiques:

The synths get a bit drab, maybe you could layer some effects with LFOs and throw on some lowpass or highpass to add a bit of buildup? That's just minor stuff though. Maybe add a few different synth lines in there? Just minor changes that would give the song some depth.

The song overall is REALLY GOOD! Keep at it, you definitely know what you're doing.


so you would say the genre is techno? cause im not quite sure myself xD

i'm gonna do some research on this "LFO" and the lowpass and highpass cause i have no idea what those are! hehe
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12/19/2011 9:15 pm
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panhead86
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As far as techno goes, this is really good!! Love the beat, it's really well made. Had to listen to it twice, it's great!

And now if I'm being picky, here's the critiques:

The synths get a bit drab, maybe you could layer some effects with LFOs and throw on some lowpass or highpass to add a bit of buildup? That's just minor stuff though. Maybe add a few different synth lines in there? Just minor changes that would give the song some depth.

The song overall is REALLY GOOD! Keep at it, you definitely know what you're doing.
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12/19/2011 9:12 pm
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Eatoncheese
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nice ima lisnin to it right now
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12/19/2011 9:10 pm
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ZaphodX
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Just use an acapella of some good vocals that would go with it. Also if you autotune your voice it will sound fine.
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12/19/2011 9:18 pm
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JenniferM
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have you actually tried that yourself? and i will NEVER use autotune! that's cheating.

Eatoncheesenice ima lisnin to it right now


cool, lemme know when ya done!

panhead86As far as techno goes, this is really good!! Love the beat, it's really well made. Had to listen to it twice, it's great!

And now if I'm being picky, here's the critiques:

The synths get a bit drab, maybe you could layer some effects with LFOs and throw on some lowpass or highpass to add a bit of buildup? That's just minor stuff though. Maybe add a few different synth lines in there? Just minor changes that would give the song some depth.

The song overall is REALLY GOOD! Keep at it, you definitely know what you're doing.


so you would say the genre is techno? cause im not quite sure myself xD

i'm gonna do some research on this "LFO" and the lowpass and highpass cause i have no idea what those are! hehe
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12/19/2011 9:15 pm
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panhead86
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This^

Auto-tune is a magical thing...
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12/19/2011 9:03 pm
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ZaphodX
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Not quite my kinda thing. I would have preferred it more with some vocals layered on top.
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12/19/2011 9:07 pm
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JenniferM
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yeah it could definately use some of those, sadly i am not a singer and i don't know anyone who can xD
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