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Need everyone's opinion on my first server trailer!
Mrgreen33gamerSo I created a gamemode server that features Super Smash Bros but in Minecraft. So I created a Server Trailer for it, and I need everyone's opinion on it! This is also my first ever trailer for, really, anything.
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I like it but at the first 10 seconds sometimes the screen flashes black, I'm not sure if thats intentional or not.
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It was an accidental edit but I liked it once I was developing it
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It's alright, some pointers:
- As others have said you should remove the clouds.
- Make the game full screen, you can see the bar across the top.
- Maybe some appropriate music for the Smash Bros theme? Instead of completely irrelevant music used on every trailer ever.
- Possibly some explanation of what the map/server actually is?
I would stick to no shaders as you are doing, think it looks much better without
Good effort nonetheless
- As others have said you should remove the clouds.
- Make the game full screen, you can see the bar across the top.
- Maybe some appropriate music for the Smash Bros theme? Instead of completely irrelevant music used on every trailer ever.
- Possibly some explanation of what the map/server actually is?
I would stick to no shaders as you are doing, think it looks much better without
Good effort nonetheless
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#1 & #2 okay I know about those.
#3 I wouldn't want to use Nintendo's music unless I wanted to get copyrighted. Also a dubstep throwback was pretty sick in my opinion.
#4 It's a trailer not a walk-through. Trails are suppose to be Epic and show some of the gameplay, not, "hey this does this and this does this".
I've also never really tried Shaders before mainly because all my passed PCs were terrible.
#3 I wouldn't want to use Nintendo's music unless I wanted to get copyrighted. Also a dubstep throwback was pretty sick in my opinion.
#4 It's a trailer not a walk-through. Trails are suppose to be Epic and show some of the gameplay, not, "hey this does this and this does this".
I've also never really tried Shaders before mainly because all my passed PCs were terrible.
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Great work, I like the quick cuts to the music. Just some improvements that you can make (from a fellow video editor):
1. I noticed that you aren't recording your Minecraft in fullscreen, you should do that so we don't have to see the white window bar at the top.
2. Remove clouds. They are in the way.
3. Have some text or added elaboration as to what your server is about. (eg. quick overview of the different types of minigames available on your server)
4. Consider using shaders for a more cinematic look.
1. I noticed that you aren't recording your Minecraft in fullscreen, you should do that so we don't have to see the white window bar at the top.
2. Remove clouds. They are in the way.
3. Have some text or added elaboration as to what your server is about. (eg. quick overview of the different types of minigames available on your server)
4. Consider using shaders for a more cinematic look.
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Yeah it was my first time ever editing and it took me a little bit mainly because I had to go through hours of clips to find good ones.
Noted next time tho.
Noted next time tho.
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Very Good!
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Thank ya !
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I would say maybe to either remove clouds or making the maps a bit lower. That way one can see everything better. Other than that, not a bad trailer, especially as you mention below it's your first time using transitions.
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Yeah eventually once I've finished a lot of the major server modifications, I'll lower some of the maps, but mainly I leave some room for players to be able to boost make onto the map. Good suggestion though boss.
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WOWIE! HOW COOL!
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My first video edit doing something with transitions :D
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Cool trailer!
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Thank ya :)
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Ok!!
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Looks pretty cool
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thanks dude!
