No problem! Honestly, the content of the videos aren't really a problem. the main and largest problem I have though is the lack of background noise. I'm listening to that one lofi hip hop radio livestream behind your videos and it honestly sounds really nice, something I'd watch honestly.
I'd probably say try editing out any silence you can, but that's not too big a deal since you sound pretty good at filling the silence, unlike a lot of youtubers actually.
(small detail that could easily just be my opinion, but I love it when youtubers tell stories. Like, what's that one funny thing that the barista at a coffee shop did? I'm a fan of Game Grumps for the same reason, small little stories that helps the audience get to know you and your sense of humour, but also gameplay and talking about the game. kinda merging the two)
The last thing I'd have to say- which you can't really change right away- but is that you should sound more confident. I know for a lot of people (me included!) it's really hard to sound confident, even if you're partially there. I'd say it honestly comes with practice recording, though.
this is the lofi background noise I was talking about :)
