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    French Fork
    07/05/2012 4:27 pm
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    Please don't reviving threads from 9 months ago.
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    French Fork
    07/05/2012 12:54 pm
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    Oh tee-hee-hee! I'm "established" as a troll!
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    French Fork
    07/05/2012 1:32 am
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    ((My golem does =P))
    Pozhar swallowed the goat, and let out a immense belch. Several trees that lay near his feet shook from the loud tremble that came from the golem's mouth, and several goats ran up the mountain.
    Pozhar sighed, and grabbed a large boulder that lay near his right hip. He brought it up to his face and eyed it, the moss covering the rock barely visible to his worn, old eyes. A deer looked up at him from a nearby oak tree, and Pozhar noticed the mammal staring at him. He lowered the boulder and tried to grab the deer, though it galloped away.
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    French Fork
    07/05/2012 1:18 am
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    Pozhar sat in a valley that resided in the shadow of a tall mountain. He sat on a jumble of trees, chewing on an alpine goat.
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    French Fork
    07/05/2012 1:12 am
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    Thanks liam.
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    French Fork
    07/05/2012 1:07 am
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    Liam, I finished my app.
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    French Fork
    07/05/2012 12:50 am
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    Name: Pozhar
    Age: 43,980
    Race: Golem (So originalz, right?! =P)
    Job: A job? Pozhar has no need for money or supplies.
    Talents: With his immense size and incredible strength, Pozhar holds the talent of fear that makes the strongest men tremble and cower before him.
    Weakness: Unknown to most, Pozhar's only weakness is inside him. An ambitious adventurer found Pozhar's weakness once, and a repair was required to heal the damage. Protected by a makeshift chest made out of planks, Pozhar's flame of a heart is weakened by the recent attack. If just two drops of omar blood were to fall on his organ, Pozhar would be reduced back to the pile of enchanted rubble from which he came.
    Backstory: Originating in the dwarf forges that reside in the bowels of the city of Watermell, Pozhar was originally created for use as a bodyguard for a dwarven wizard, Gohnur. One night, while Pozhar was in Gohnur's workshop, preparing a feast, Gohnur was mugged. Gohnur didn't want to give up his money, so the muggers stabbed him, took his coins, and left his lifeless corpse in the middle of a dark alley.
    Pozhar, worried about Gohnur, left the workshop and started searching for Gohnur. Eventually, Pozhar noticed a crowd gathered around something near an alley, and out of curiosity, he walked up for a closer look. To Pozhar's horror, a glass-eyed Gohnur stared back at him, his bloody robes contrasting against the colorful colors of the dwarven crowd.
    Out of anger, Pozhar attacked the crowd, throwing the innocent dwarfs into walls and smashing the fearful group with his feet. Seeing how the dwarfs know hated him, Pozhar escaped the forges and fled to the Mountains of Watermell, where he know feeds off of mountain water and alpine goats.

    Anything Else: Ysatnaf Pozhar's appearance:
    Click to reveal
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    French Fork
    07/04/2012 11:48 pm
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    RolesofPlayer's App:

    Name: "Kiolso"
    Age: Kiolso, as he is known, is eons old. Fifty-thousand years is the best estimate to date.
    Personality: [Must I really fill this out? I prefer to develop my personalities over the course of the RP.]
    Appearance: http://fc04.deviantart.net/fs71/i/2010/061/a/5/Quarian_Exile_by_Megas_SF.jpg
    Species: "Buzoku no"
    Backstory: "Kiolso" is from a desert planet, infested with large predators, and large prey. In fact, the Buzoku no, are one of the smallest inhabitants living there. They tamed large peaceful creatures, and even augmented them for combat. They have a weak immune system, due to the lack of harmful bacteria on the desert planet. They had large pug-like creatures, that Kiolso hated. He has a deep, and utter hatred for things that even remotely look like pugs.
    Kiolso, was one of the leading soldiers there, and contributed to the development of an environmental suit for survival in areas with bacteria. He also had a large animal, that he augmented to be superior. So much so, it was almost the Apex Predator.
    After so much genetic engineering, it was more synthetic than organic. It had multiple A.I. processors, and such. One day, Kiolso awoke in a nice room. Oblivious to how he got there.
    Anything else: Erm... No?
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    French Fork
    07/04/2012 11:26 pm
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    Thanks.
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    French Fork
    07/04/2012 11:17 pm
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    What?
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    French Fork
    07/04/2012 11:17 pm
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    Alright. And have you see my Elder Scrolls fan fiction? I believe it's a few pages back.
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    French Fork
    07/04/2012 11:13 pm
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    I add some helpful criticism here and there, and you can check the last few pages for some proof. Anyway, I recommend checking your messages.
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    French Fork
    07/04/2012 10:54 pm
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    Anyone interested in looking at some of my Elder Scrolls fan-fiction?
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    French Fork
    07/04/2012 10:15 pm
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    Well, I guess I'm off to Pedotown.
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    French Fork
    07/04/2012 9:58 pm
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    Name: Nithilus
    Age: Unknown.
    Personality: Although Nithilus is quite aggressive and rarely thinks twice before inflicting harm on someone, he's clever and can make useful strategic plans in the midst of battle.
    Appearance:
    Click to reveal

    Species: Human
    Backstory: Nithilus lives a life in which terrorizing is the way he makes a living. Not for money though. For the actual ability to live. After making a deal with Mr. P as a young child to free his parents and himself from slavery, Nithilus was then taken from his home and raised by Mr. P. There Nithilus learned the art of combat, and had worked for Mr. P for quite a long time, always knowing that if he didn't complete his job on time, his head would be sitting on Mr. P's desk. It was not until Nithilus's parents died that Nithilus learned why Mr. P kept him around. The deal wasn't only to free Nithilus's family. It had come with a price.
    Nithilus eventually escaped from the hands of Mr. P, and resided in Imperial City as a crime lord, though he was found by Mr. P's mercenaries and was selected for the "Echo Service."

    Anything Else: Sgup.
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    French Fork
    07/04/2012 9:30 pm
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    Use SIMG instead of IMG. It reduces the image size so it's a perfect size for PMC's posting area.
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    French Fork
    07/04/2012 7:25 pm
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    I find it quite interesting, but I just have a little tip for you.
    Instead of using "said" over and over, change it up a bit, such as "replied", or "responded", "continued", and all that jazz.
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    French Fork
    07/04/2012 7:09 pm
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    I did. It was interesting.
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    French Fork
    07/04/2012 7:05 pm
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    I have some more Elder Scrolls fan-fiction if anyone is interested.
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    French Fork
    07/04/2012 6:58 pm
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    Just some spacing, that's all.
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