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    11/08/2013 11:44 pm
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    Ru jolted onto the roof of a tall shack using his ability and began stalking the wealthy looking girl. She had with her a bag, it didn't seem to be overly full, and what looked like some sort of folded blade.
    What would a delicate wealthy girl such as herself use such a thing for? Ru thought.
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    11/05/2013 10:32 am
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    ((The Nebulus caused much plant and animal life to adapt for survival. So maybe not droagons, but big lizards XD))
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    11/04/2013 3:29 pm
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    Ru hauled his now stocked bag onto his back. He now had the task of escorting Oliver to his Grandparent's house not too far from where he was shopping.
    ''It was nice hanging around with ya' Kid. But it's too dangerous to bring you where I'm going.'' Ru told him.
    Oliver hadn't spoken a word now that the house was in view.
    Ru nudged him towards the porch. Oliver turned to him. ''Mr, please bring my momma home!'' He yelled as he ran into the comfort of his grandparent's house.

    ''Later kid...''
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    11/04/2013 2:43 pm
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    Ru pulled the boy towards a close by stall, he tried to blend in by studying the items laid out on the counter.
    He peeked at the girl, she seemed to be walking away. ''It's a good thing we didn't get caught up with her little man. A pretty lady like herself would have nothing to do with such a place as the capital... So why was she here?''
    Ru sighed.
    ''I forgot to ask you kid, what's your name?''
    The boy looked up with a smirk.
    ''My name's Oliver.''
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    11/03/2013 8:59 pm
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    I'd stop people making any religious posts on PMC that always start arguments.
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    11/03/2013 8:53 pm
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    We'll see if it's too Mary Sue when you finish :3
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    11/03/2013 8:23 pm
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    I'm exited to read it :3
    You'll have an advantage now that the abilities have been posted.
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    11/03/2013 8:21 pm
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    Ru stopped in the middle of the crowd. The boy was tugging at his arm.
    ''What is it kid? If it's money your looking for, I ain't got any more than you.''

    The boy pointed out a girl that was heading towards the crowd. ''Is she that girl you were talkin' about? Annie?''
    Ru followed the boy's finger to see a girl with bright red hair. ''Kid, Annie wouldn't be able to afford clothes like that, she was too lazy to find a job. That's why she stayed with me.''
    Ru said.
    Ru gave the girl another look over.
    ''Kid... I've got a bad feeling about her, stay behind me. Somethin' in my gut is saying she isn't very pleasant.'' He warned.
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    11/03/2013 6:56 pm
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    I have noticed that a lot of astrologers don't recognize Ophiuchus as a star sign.
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    11/03/2013 6:51 pm
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    Well dang, I haven't heard of that one at all....
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    11/03/2013 6:50 pm
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    After a long while of walking and talking about what happened during the activation, the boy seemed less likely to stab Ru and more saddened by his story. He asked what Annie looked like, Ru gave an exaggerated description of her making her seem like someone who'd put a model to shame.

    The capital was loud and disturbed the conversation he and the boy were having, once the first wave of clattering metals and gossiping mouths hit them they realized they were entering the commercial district. There wasn't a single shop that wouldn't sell weapons, the world had become a dangerous place where ''Survival of the fittest.'' Really did apply.
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    11/03/2013 6:43 pm
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    ((Stormbringer, just so you know. RP's are done in third person not first person. Example: Drake stuck within the crowd, scanning for people that looked like they'd be of use in his quest. Not ''I stuck in with the crowd looking for people who looked like they'd be of use in my quest.''))
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    11/03/2013 6:41 pm
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    Hmmm? o-o
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    11/03/2013 5:09 pm
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    The capital was ahead, buildings looked less battered but still as though they had been through a large amount of punishment.
    A little boy was trotting along beside Ru, he didn't seem to have any parents or older siblings around.
    ''Hey kid? Ain't you got a mom or dad you should be with?'' Ru asked.
    The boy stared up at him and pulled out a knife that was sticking out the back of his pants. ''Don't get any ideas!'' He threatened.
    For a boy that looked probably about 10 he didn't seem very scared or upset being on his own.
    ''That's a pretty big knife for a guy so small...'' Said Ru.
    The boy studied the long blades protruding from Ru's wrists and leading to his elbows.
    Ru got the idea on what he was implying.
    ''I guess I can't say much then...'' Ru grumbled.
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    11/03/2013 2:56 pm
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    Ru dragged his blades through the sand as he walked towards the capital. He needed supplies medical care and food. He wouldn't get to the wealthy lands without it, there was no form of transport, electricity was scarce and most vehicles have been emptied of any gas they once had.

    He was not the only person heading towards the capital, he seemed to be one in a gigantic herd of people who have lost family members. Many people seemed to be clutching large cooking knives and some even holding guns.
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    11/03/2013 12:40 am
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    A few tips.
    Backrounds should be done in the third person not first.
    They also should be at least 3 paragraphs.
    ''going through puberty'' is not a good character description.
    Most people tend to have second names
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    11/02/2013 11:59 pm
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    bubbykazName:Nerona Hazama
    Age:21
    Nickname *If you want one* :The Grim Reaper
    Appearance:
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    Gender:Female
    Personality:Serius,Smart,Stratigist,and Evil
    Star Sign:Libra
    Backstory:Nerona was born into a wealthy family she always thought of having a peace filled life has nothing bad could happen to her.She was taught many things that anyone needed to know and more.She was also taught how to be enlegent like a nobel and usless skills too.Nerona was intrested in training into combat she learned thebasics of hand to hand combat and was allowed to learn one weapon and took the most complicated weapon because she asumed it whould be easeier.It took her 9 years to complete her training with the Scythe she learned 2 years she has an ability that almostno one has but she could not find out what such an ability is.Nerona was highly intrested into new tech so she decided to study it more she learned little before she left her parents home and began to move to a newer area with her possesions.
    Skills:Scything,Stealth,Agility,Dexterity,and Tech Use
    Weaknesses:Aracnids,Insects,and Pesimistic
    Weapon:Scythe
    Anything Else:Diamond Potato

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    11/02/2013 11:58 pm
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    Stormbringer527Name: Drake Twinfield
    Age: 20
    Nickname *If you want one* : Duos.
    Appearance: Tall, with a messy head of black hair, sharply cut face, and broad shoulders. His eyes are two separate colors, his left being a stormy gray orb, and his right is an inhumanly bright green, and has extraordinarily good sight. He generally keeps his unique eyes hidden behind either his hair, which is constantly hanging over one side of his face, despite how much he hates it, or a pair of tinted glasses.
    Gender: How many girls are named Drake? C'mon.
    Personality: Drake, despite having one of the most badass nicknames ever, and being super awesome when it comes to fighting, might be one of the most awkward people ever. Many a night locked away playing World of Warcraft, League of Legends, or reading comic books have ruined any hope of him having even mild social skills. Though he's a rather skilled actor, and through his thespianism has gradually regained his ability to speak to other "Human Beans." However, he still vastly prefers the dark, messy cave of the room he used to inhabit, like a dragon and it's den.
    Star Sign: Gemini.
    Backstory: Before the activation of the Nebulus, Drake was famous in the online gaming circles as a skilled player of games in practically every genre. Players of traditional shooters knew him as The Shotgun King, Tf2 players would often quit games upon the appearance of a Pyro in a limited addition Valve Hat. In World of Warcraft, he was the leader of a guild known as The Sentinels. He also held several trophies in strategy game tournaments, and earned money as a hobby writer. After the Nebulus went off, everything changed. The giant battles raging in the streets sent the servers of various games down, giving him very little to do. He ended up practicing martial arts, and teaching himself how to handle a sword. And then a second one. He also learned how to shoot a shotgun, and incorporated it partially into his self taught fighting style.
    Skills: He's very good with his two, single edged blades, and knows how to handle his shotgun, in addition, he's incredibly intelligent, a dangerous opponent, who specializes in dealing out lots of damage very quickly.
    Weaknesses: His training focused almost entirely on the offensive aspects of combat, leaving very little defenses to his name, a couple good hits, and he'll go down like the glass cannon he is.
    Weapon: Twin swords that are strapped comfortably to waist, and a shotgun on his back.
    Anything Else: Diamond Potato.


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