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  lyricallyprotected
  Public • June 25, 2023, 10:19 am
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  Hello! I belong to the Church of Jesus Christ of Latter-day Saints. I prepared a lesson for today, and I wanted to share it with you! It might still be a work in progress, and I might change it before I teach my lesson, but I hope I can teach well for today! ^^
  
  https://docs.google.com/document/d/1tWSROYpqHC-PS7Lv8C8FP2a8s5ye4Jw5izpdtEPeZzE/edit
  
  I stuck a good deal to the script, but I think the lesson will go well! What do you think? Did I do a good job?
  (Please no bible-bashing or hate, I'm just trying to share my excitement with finishing something I procrastinated on.)
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  lyricallyprotected Thanks for your critique! I really appreciate it.

  Stormy • 2023-06-25 20:25:14

  

  No problem

  Stormy It looked pretty good at first glances! I like the constant reference to scripture. I do think you should add some verse...

  lyricallyprotected • 2023-06-25 19:33:33

  

  Thanks for your critique! I really appreciate it.

  Stormy • 2023-06-25 11:55:28

  

  It looked pretty good at first glances! I like the constant reference to scripture. I do think you should add some verses about when Jesus prayed on Mount Olive the day before he died. I also think you should look for some bible verses about what Jesus has done for us to add in the “what has our savior done for us part”