I'm not asking for an ad but I have some constructive criticism:
Do like a pan over the whole town and don't go inside the buildings unless they are huge.
Add shaders to make the whole place look more appealing.
I don't like the text over the video, either have it separate or on the sky or something.
The players running around made it look unprofessional.
Hope it helps and I hope you get some more interest soon!
