Tell me what you think about it. I used Jamziboy's edit of John smiths texturepack.

My friends Tidondor, rene, nemerol2 and Gielspons helped.

Texturepack: http://www.mediafire.com/?92ljjlgh2m1g98r

This is not my texturepack i didn't make it. :P

Storyline:
Once there was a peaceful country somewhere in the middle of the ocean. The country was founded by the eldest person of the already known world. And that is how this country was born. They called the country Jalaric. But when there were too many people, they needed to expand their habitat, so they decided to build cities and villages all over the Island. So they travelled to the other side the island and made villages and cities everywhere they could. But it all went wrong when they decided to name someone King of Jalaric. That was the moment when people weren't free to do what they wanted to do anymore. The King let people build him a city so big that you could see it from a very far distance. Almost from all over the Island. After fifteen years of captivity by the king, some people decided to create a rebellion. There have been many attempts to kill the King, but all of them were in vain.