Infestation

Hello this is my first map and i have put a lot of effort into it so far.I would love any feedback. The texture pack was made by luis alonso 64 bits https://www.planetminecraft.com/texture_pack/a-little-bit-like-fallout-luiss-revision Update: so I have basically finished the map, except for testing, but I cannot test rn as my pc is being stupid. Anyways, the map is a bit short but this map was more of an introduction and also to see if anyone would be interested in my work. I'm not the most talented with command blocks so most commands are basic.
-Herra

Update: I am proud to say the download is finnally out, I am sorry for the delay but if you are still interested, check it out!
-Herra