Like the comment below me says. I used to be with the Hypixel Builders and mainly what gives it away that you took inspiration from us is the layout of our lobbies. When making something for commissions it's important to be your own not to try and recreate something from other networks. Be unique, give things your own shape and structure.

A good tip from me is to make your lobby feel less plain in the middle. You could either shrink the island down to have everything closer and nicely flowing together or you can fill the middle in with a platform like you did in the front, or have trees/bushes, height level differences in your terrain, ect.

I like it, but it resembles Hypixel a little bit too much...