Lava Parkour Attack!

your advice will help us alot in future maps that we make
THANK YOU

Oh and make sure that players start with the gamemode adventure for it makes it easy for players to cheat, just sayin!

Your map was ok, i'd give it 5/10.  I gave 5 for I didn't really know what to do in some cases for exampe, not telling the player how to open the door, and make it clear to a player which way to go, also the parkour collidied with other sections so the parkour was easy. But overall the map was ok. Now that i have given you infomation, use it to improve your future maps. :)

Ways to improve:
1 - Have a little story behind the parkour.
2 - Instead of having ALL the parkour pretty much situated in one place, have it that players have to solve puzzles in oreder to unlock an item or unlock another part of the parkour. Have it so that people teleport to different sections, so once on part has been complete they teleport to the next stage of the parkour
3 - At the beginning there was no commandblocks what so ever underneath the emerald blocks. So i couldnt really set my checkpoint or remove the entities.
4 - Make it so that the parkour getss harder as players go along to complete the parkour. I found it easy to complete.
5 - Good luck on other maps you create in the future.
6 - It would be nice if I could help out on any other maps you may be making, you might need some lessons on improving with your redstone abillities. Not related to command blocks.

Sorry but sucks!