Update 9/25: Episode 2 is up now! Go check it out here and let me know what you think. It would help a lot!

Hey everybody! I recently made a new youtube channel, and I thought this map would be an awesome way to start it off. It was created by Jigarbov, on the minecraft forums, and it has an awesome story with great gameplay. I really wanted to show it off, so I made some videos about it. Since my channel is extremely new, I was wondering if you could critique this video and tell me how I did. It would really help me out. And if anyone ever wants to do a video with me, just let me know. That would be awesome. Thanks for your help!

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