Thanks so much for your advice! I'll work on it as soon as possible!

This was a nice map, a solid 7/10 in my books. I enjoyed most of the map, and some parts proved to be quite the challenge. However, this map is quite a rage inducing one for me, some parts were just absolutely frustrating.





~MINOR SPOILERS AHEAD~






First and foremost, I would recommend you putting dialogue into this map. There are many moments where you are blindly running around wasting time trying to figure out if something happened. Having dialogue or some kind of notification in the chat would help a lot with saving time and progressing the map, especially considering this is such a long map already.


Now let's talk about each chapter!


Chapter 1
- This one was very fun, this is what a puzzle map should be like. There's a good variety here and its a good amount of difficulty needed to progress. My only problem was the riddle is pretty much unsolvable because there isn't enough clues, not to mention the first one is misleading. Combine those two factors together and you get a big roadblock at the very beginning of the map. (I had to cheat this one). There needs to be more clues to pinpoint the answer. Tell us a category, an obvious hint, or SOMETHING. The scavenger hunt after was good, I liked it.
Chapter 2
- Oh boy this is my favorite chapter. I absolutely loved this part, especially the race. No problems here, I enjoyed this chapter the most during my playthrough.
Chapter 3
- This chapter was pretty good, my only problem is that the button that opens the door to the quartz block is impossible to see. Literally. Impossible. Absolutely bad choice of sticking a stone button on a stone block in a corner that's nearly pitch black. I had to cheat here to find the button just to progress, after that though I resumed my play and got through. I recommend lighting up the area a bit more if you are going to hide the button in such an obscure place.
Chapter 4
- This was a good chapter, I enjoyed it alot. The piston run was really good, but also near impossible at one point. At the first safe spot (corner) it is really, really difficult to make it to the checkpoint. You need like a frame perfect move just to get onto the checkpoint, this should not be that hard. Its only so hard because of the ceiling. Its your choice, but I recommend making it easier somehow. This absolutely made me want to rip my hair out at how annoying it was to get. Took me well near 200 attempts, and I'm pretty good at parkour (I play a lot of parkour maps and I complete about 90% of them without cheating). I liked the vertical parkour a lot, this part was great. I recommend you take a look at the redstone puzzle in this chapter, I solved it instantly using only one button. I don't think it was supposed to do that.
Chapter 5
- Oh man this chapter, where do I begin? This chapter was hell, literally. Now it may be different for others, but this chapter is the definition of rage inducing. I cheated the most here because of how difficult it was to progress. The Pool, it was great to have an underwater maze, it was not great to waste time and wander aimlessly (as mentioned earlier). There was no goal from the start, so you walk in blind. after wandering for a good 10-15 minutes, I found out a lever started to open up the secret vault. The problem, was after getting into the vault and pulling the lever inside, I did not know the next area (the range) opened up. I wandered aimlessly in the maze for another 15 minutes or so only then to just straight up leave back to the entrance. One big face palm, just because there was no direction in this chapter. The Range, more like the impossible. Do you really expect someone to be able to hit every single button before the arrow despawns while under nausea? Now I don't remember arrows despawning so fast, but apparently they do. The bow is already not 100% accurate when shooting, add the nausea and its just wasting time. I literally couldn't get all the buttons without having my first couple despawn so I semi-cheated and cleared the nausea. The Dog House was great, it was a fun minecraft boss fight. IMO the map should have ended there, it would have ended on a good note from me. But nope, the very last challenge was to find 10 redstone, which I could not. What I want to know is if there even is 10 redstone in the last area, because even by cheating and using spectator mode I could not find any more redstone. I found 6/10 legitimately and that's all I could get, even with cheating. Please tell me you have confirmed where all 10 are, because as far as I can tell there is only 6. I can't find any other chests in this area, it was so frustrating so I just creative mode my way through to the door to end the map. This chapter tempted me to punch my monitor so bad because of how annoying it was to check every possible corner (I hope I did) only to find NOTHING. I really do hope you look over this area and quadruple check that there is 10 accessible redstone to unlock the door.




Overall, I still enjoyed the map. There was a lot of great things in this map. What I said is not meant to offend you, but to point out troubling parts. I hope you do well and I would like to see another puzzle map with new ideas from you.

P.S. sorry for the long read! I really liked this map and felt compelled to write a detailed review especially since you said it hasn't been fully tested (on minecraftmaps).

Yah, it's working ! Thank you ! ^-^

I've changed to dropbox, see if it works now.

Heya there. Your map seems to be the perfect one I was searching for ! But I can't download it since MediaFire asking me to get a prenium account (Just because of the many files in it). Will you be okay to send the file at my mail adress or change the Platform for the download ? I'm dying to try your mansion ! Have a nice day and thank you for the hard work.

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