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Level 40 : Master Blacksmith
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pls tell me if you think i am doing anything against the rules so i can change it


stuff that is not really important for you

this is my entry for the industrial contest i worked really hard on it for 3 weeks and i hope you like it.
i got my inspiration from the woudagemaal and some other things.

i particepated in this contest because i already wanted to make something in this style for a long time and because i am fannboy of lentebriesje and carlooo and i wanted to show my builds to them.

lore

Once there was this world named sollore, there was not that much high tech like we see in our nowadays world. Just farmers and craftsmen. But then Irise invented something he called a steam engine this machane was able to create huge powers. in the meanwhile was the amount of people fast growing in sollore. they thought Irise could maybe find a solution for this problem and he actually did his idea was a huge amount of work but they could do it because they needed only half as much people on the land because Irise inventions had made evrything alot easy'er. So they started his insane idea this idea was that they should make a wall of grass stone and dirt around the island they lived and then pump all the water out. This worked and evryone got food but Irise had some other plans for this world then his civilians he decided that the world would be alot better iff most people would live in the city and worked in the factory's he was going to make. This ment that evryone had a terrible live beside him and his friends they fancy houses and an easy life. this story is kinda stupid but i am not a book writer nor am i fluent english.
hope you enjoyd it and remember eventualy Irise will be killed in a revolution(yes a sad anding for a genius but he seemed to be a bitch) and the power would go to a parlement that has been choosen by voting.


Spoiler - click to reveal
http://imgur.com/p4pqWok this is where Irise and his friends lived, http://imgur.com/xidjBhD this is where he prefered otherpeople to live


if you wonder if i broke the expanding land rule i brushed the dirt on the old land and then fixed the water on a higher level so it looks like that piece of sea is drained while it is the otherway round.

Creditthanks to 8257pqoscsg nackerbacksid worldedit voxelsniper creatruth mojang
Progress100% complete
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  • karel5123
  • Level 10
  • Journeyman Dragon
  • November 3, 2014, 8:20 am
Nice build good luck!
  • GamerAPTFour
  • Level 13
  • Journeyman Skinner
  • November 1, 2014, 8:08 am
NICE!
  • Poohcraft
  • Level 46
  • Master Architect
  • October 31, 2014, 5:31 am
An extremely impressive build! I really love the designs and all.Still I think you should work on that story a bit more. Also you've copied a lot of the buildings, which is alright, of course, but I'd like to see more elements in the build. Also you could try using a more diverse black pallet and concentrate in the distinctivity of the indivisual buildings. Best of luck for You!

~poohcraft

-faved,diamonded,subscribed!
  • bowbuilder
  • Level 40
  • Master Blacksmith
  • October 31, 2014, 9:00 am
thank you and you are right about the point that too many houses copie/paste (they where just boring to make) you are also right about the story i could maybe make it better to day not sure cause i am bad at writting down stories. in my head i can easely imagine a story with it's own world but when i try to write it down....  i do not really agree with a more diverse blackpalet because there are not really that much other blacks in minecraft and the wool has that wool patern that i find for some reason disturbing. but i'll try it soon because i am not to sure about it.

thanks for the feedback :) comments like yours are really more worth to me then just it looks good or it looks bad.
  • Poohcraft
  • Level 46
  • Master Architect
  • October 31, 2014, 9:53 am
Np. I think it's hard to find different blocks for the kind of houses you build. I had the same problem with the victorian slum building complex i'm working on, so I (too) made the same mistake and ended up using surprisingly similar materials as you. I've noticed that it's really hard especially when using the default resourcepack to find good materials for this kind of thing. Instead I compensated that by making the houses as distinctive as possible, and mixing in different styles.I would suggest arranging the buildings so that the same buildings wouldn't be next to each other. I think there's nothing really wrong in copying (although I've not copied a single block) and it's a good way of filling a map when you've got so little time in hand. I have to change my slums a little though so that it doesn't look like I'm copying you XD I think my project will be released pretty much in the last minuite, though. I have a lot to do :(
  • bowbuilder
  • Level 40
  • Master Blacksmith
  • October 31, 2014, 11:53 am
aha well i won't write a longer anser to this cause my fingers hurt from typing the whole day so just good luck with your project mate :)
  • Poohcraft
  • Level 46
  • Master Architect
  • October 31, 2014, 10:11 pm
Hehe THanks XD
  • Daytodie
  • Level 6
  • Apprentice Crafter
  • October 30, 2014, 3:13 pm
Great work, I can see the 3 weeks.  Love the plane and I am impressed with the ornate iron work. +1D
  • bowbuilder
  • Level 40
  • Master Blacksmith
  • October 31, 2014, 9:00 am
thank you
This is really good :D
Beats mine by a million :D Well done!
  • Crafty
  • Level 51
  • Grandmaster Network
  • October 27, 2014, 2:35 pm
looks really fantastic. better than my build
  • bowbuilder
  • Level 40
  • Master Blacksmith
  • October 28, 2014, 11:07 am
thanks i hope i can see your build soon too btw love your skinn's
Vary wonderfully done. Reec3ty obviously has no idea what he's talking about, don't listen to him. You're build is superb, Athion will have a tough decision. Although, remember, you need atleast 5 normal screenshots to qualify. For your convenience I put it in bold below:

YOU NEED 5 NORMAL SCREENSHOTS TO QUALIFY, YOU'VE GOT ALL RENDERS. YOU'RE BUILD IS PERFECT OTHERWISE! GOOD LUCK!
  • bowbuilder
  • Level 40
  • Master Blacksmith
  • October 27, 2014, 9:19 am
thanks btw it is not that you need 5 normal screenshots but max 5 renders also known as 75% of 20
but i only have 4 renders the other 15 pics are just ingame screenshots non edited only used optifine for bigger render distance but i believe this was allowed i'll read the rules again in a sec to check that.
  • Reec3ty
  • Level 6
  • Apprentice Programmer
  • October 27, 2014, 12:52 am
meh, looks like a bunch of blocks to me :/
  • bowbuilder
  • Level 40
  • Master Blacksmith
  • October 27, 2014, 9:20 am
it is a bunch of blocks but it is also a concept of a industrial world like i think it kinda would look yes it is a litle scrappy but it was build in 3 weeks and mainly by one builder
  • Reec3ty
  • Level 6
  • Apprentice Programmer
  • October 27, 2014, 5:39 pm
t'was a joke mate, blocky = minecraft?
  • Noobso123
  • Level 40
  • Master Architect
  • November 4, 2014, 8:50 pm
I get it
  • Yepimrobbie
  • Level 4
  • Apprentice Network
  • October 26, 2014, 5:29 pm
Omg!!
  • bowbuilder
  • Level 40
  • Master Blacksmith
  • October 27, 2014, 9:20 am
doggs
  • TeroXCro
  • Level 24
  • Expert Architect
  • October 26, 2014, 11:50 am
excellent work dude :D diamond ;)
  • bowbuilder
  • Level 40
  • Master Blacksmith
  • October 26, 2014, 12:45 pm
*catches diamond* thank you bro
  • TeroXCro
  • Level 24
  • Expert Architect
  • October 26, 2014, 12:58 pm
no problem bro ;)
is this in contest ??? woah i hope you win and a diamond for you !
  • skummaboy
  • Level 1
  • New Miner
  • October 26, 2014, 10:43 am
Good build, good luck in contest
  • bowbuilder
  • Level 40
  • Master Blacksmith
  • October 26, 2014, 10:49 am
thanks edvin
  • tomtennis
  • Level 35
  • Artisan Wolf Whisperer
  • October 26, 2014, 9:23 am
Hey dude! i saw ur build and ur gonne be the number 1! why? well most projects dont fit the theme very well ur does! u builded almost the full map what none does only the bigger buildteams and ur amazing and nice!

-tomtennis
  • bowbuilder
  • Level 40
  • Master Blacksmith
  • October 26, 2014, 10:06 am
thank you and i hope you are right
  • tomtennis
  • Level 35
  • Artisan Wolf Whisperer
  • October 27, 2014, 9:12 am
hey! :D
Q1: is this made on a server?
Q2: if it is i can maybe help u with other projects

T1: could u make the next time a full render and/or a cinematic? :D

-tomtennis
  • bowbuilder
  • Level 40
  • Master Blacksmith
  • October 27, 2014, 9:25 am
it was started on nacker_bag_sid 's server since the awb host was away for a while so i could the map could not be uploaded and it was finished on my private server because of reasons

no sorry i like to work on my projects alone or with close friends
  • tomtennis
  • Level 35
  • Artisan Wolf Whisperer
  • October 27, 2014, 10:43 pm
k =3
:D
  • 8257pqoscsg
  • Level 22
  • Expert Unicorn
  • October 26, 2014, 7:47 am
i'm lovin it
  • bowbuilder
  • Level 40
  • Master Blacksmith
  • October 26, 2014, 8:10 am
macdonalds

where you know your bread is made from plastic
  • Herion
  • Level 7
  • Apprentice Dragon
  • October 26, 2014, 6:51 am
This is very nice,good luck!
May you share the name of the site/software that you use to make the renders of the entire map ?
I'm building my entry too and it's large,so I wanted to make some pics showing them all on the same time like you did on some pictures. Thx!
  • bowbuilder
  • Level 40
  • Master Blacksmith
  • October 26, 2014, 8:08 am
the renders are made with chunky renders and the front pic is slightly eddited with krita
  • Herion
  • Level 7
  • Apprentice Dragon
  • October 26, 2014, 5:42 pm
Thanks!
  • TheCriticMan
  • Level 2
  • Apprentice Explorer
  • October 26, 2014, 6:14 am
Wow this is gonna get 1st
  • bowbuilder
  • Level 40
  • Master Blacksmith
  • October 26, 2014, 6:41 am
hmm there will be uploaded some more great things i know already that there are 3 teams with extremely skilled people particepating so i don't think i get 1st but thanks :)
  • TheCriticMan
  • Level 2
  • Apprentice Explorer
  • October 26, 2014, 12:34 pm
Well, I bet you definitely are in the top 10
best entry I've seen so far :D
  • bowbuilder
  • Level 40
  • Master Blacksmith
  • October 26, 2014, 6:40 am
thank you :)
nice work !
  • bowbuilder
  • Level 40
  • Master Blacksmith
  • October 26, 2014, 4:31 am
thanks :)
  • ImperiumMC
  • Level 50
  • Grandmaster Architect
  • October 26, 2014, 3:20 am
very nice, I love the plane pulling the logo along aswell :P
  • bowbuilder
  • Level 40
  • Master Blacksmith
  • October 26, 2014, 3:48 am
thank you i made that plane as very last thing, i made a render of the map but then realised that i did not like it that the logo was just randomly flying
  • Booclaw12
  • Level 24
  • Expert Architect
  • October 26, 2014, 1:51 am
yeah great job ! :D
  • bowbuilder
  • Level 40
  • Master Blacksmith
  • October 26, 2014, 2:26 am
thank you
  • Pixel
  • Level 39
  • Artisan Mage
  • October 25, 2014, 10:55 pm
This is amazing.
  • bowbuilder
  • Level 40
  • Master Blacksmith
  • October 26, 2014, 2:23 am
thanks :)
  • sjoerdtim
  • Level 34
  • Artisan Architect
  • October 25, 2014, 2:52 pm
Great work!
  • bowbuilder
  • Level 40
  • Master Blacksmith
  • October 26, 2014, 2:23 am
thanks
  • FrostyPrime
  • Level 31
  • Artisan Creeper Hugger
  • October 25, 2014, 2:00 pm
Looking cool buddy!
  • bowbuilder
  • Level 40
  • Master Blacksmith
  • October 26, 2014, 2:23 am
thank you frosty
  • frozenintime
  • Level 31
  • Artisan Electrician
  • October 25, 2014, 12:33 pm
sweeet
  • bowbuilder
  • Level 40
  • Master Blacksmith
  • October 25, 2014, 12:37 pm
thank you :)
  • dalbaugh4s
  • Level 20
  • Expert Archer
  • October 25, 2014, 12:26 pm
Nice job. Good luck!
  • bowbuilder
  • Level 40
  • Master Blacksmith
  • October 25, 2014, 12:37 pm
thanks
  • Gargerad
  • Level 7
  • Apprentice Architect
  • October 25, 2014, 12:18 pm
Ejaculation incoming! would fap again 10/10 favorite and diamond
  • bowbuilder
  • Level 40
  • Master Blacksmith
  • October 25, 2014, 12:37 pm
thanks bro :)
  • 7thbatalion
  • Level 44
  • Master Artist
  • October 25, 2014, 11:39 am
Cool details bro! :D
  • bowbuilder
  • Level 40
  • Master Blacksmith
  • October 25, 2014, 11:42 am
thank you i personally was not to sure about the detail lvl but i have not realy anymore time for it
  • Whisper974
  • Level 48
  • Master Architect
  • October 25, 2014, 11:39 am
Nice ! I'll upload mine soon ! but i think yours is better :D
  • bowbuilder
  • Level 40
  • Master Blacksmith
  • October 25, 2014, 11:41 am
thank you and can't wait to see yours C:
  • Animan2
  • Level 50
  • Grandmaster Architect
  • October 25, 2014, 11:33 am
You have made a nice entry. Good luck to you mate...)
  • bowbuilder
  • Level 40
  • Master Blacksmith
  • October 25, 2014, 11:35 am
thank you :)

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