Published Nov 9th, 2012, 11/9/12 9:03 am
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Yay i finished my contest skin, was kinda hard to construct something half robot half human but i did it somehow, even if i personally think i could have maybe done better.
If you find anything to improve, untill contest is finished tell me :)
PLZ CLEAR YOUR BROWSER AND JAVA CACHE I AM UPDATING AS MUCH AS I CAN :)
Its possible to take off the hat to see his brain implant :)
Story:
Daniel was a normal police officer in the year 2153, untill he lost the half of his head and his hands while trying to dismantle a bomb placed by cyberextremists inside a factory for medical supplies. They did it cause they thought, that the factory was just a camo for a bioweapon laboratory. He was the volunteer, who wanted to dismantle the bomb cause if it would have blown up, the radiation of the nuclear power devices from the factory, would kill all kind of life in an area of 100 km².
Sadly the bomb was to complaicated even for him and his 30 years of experience, so it blew up and killed everyone in his hometown, even his wife and his son. Only one of his family survived, his daughter.
He was one step away from death, rescued by cyborg implants. He even needed an auditory brain stem implant to stay alive. Also he needs a artificial lung, powerd by a cold fusion battery.
He sweared to get his revenge.
He quitted his job as a police officer and began to hunt the terrorist group which was responsible for what happened to him, his family and his hometown.
To protect his daughter he chose the pseudonym Black Raven.
And his hunt isn't finished yet !
If you find any grammar fails feel free to take them with you xD
If you find anything to improve, untill contest is finished tell me :)
PLZ CLEAR YOUR BROWSER AND JAVA CACHE I AM UPDATING AS MUCH AS I CAN :)
Its possible to take off the hat to see his brain implant :)
Story:
Daniel was a normal police officer in the year 2153, untill he lost the half of his head and his hands while trying to dismantle a bomb placed by cyberextremists inside a factory for medical supplies. They did it cause they thought, that the factory was just a camo for a bioweapon laboratory. He was the volunteer, who wanted to dismantle the bomb cause if it would have blown up, the radiation of the nuclear power devices from the factory, would kill all kind of life in an area of 100 km².
Sadly the bomb was to complaicated even for him and his 30 years of experience, so it blew up and killed everyone in his hometown, even his wife and his son. Only one of his family survived, his daughter.
He was one step away from death, rescued by cyborg implants. He even needed an auditory brain stem implant to stay alive. Also he needs a artificial lung, powerd by a cold fusion battery.
He sweared to get his revenge.
He quitted his job as a police officer and began to hunt the terrorist group which was responsible for what happened to him, his family and his hometown.
To protect his daughter he chose the pseudonym Black Raven.
And his hunt isn't finished yet !
If you find any grammar fails feel free to take them with you xD
| Gender | Male |
| Model | Steve |
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UPDATE : by GeXile 11/09/2012 9:58:18 amNov 9th, 2012
NOTES 09.11.2012:
- Added some shading on shoulders.
- Changed color of right eye to lightblue.
- Changed brightness of face and chest.
- Added some shading on shoulders.
- Changed color of right eye to lightblue.
- Changed brightness of face and chest.
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The order of events is confusing. You go from "the one survivor was his daughter" to "He". It makes things a bit confusing.
Good story, but a lil confusing on the skin
needed an auditory brain stem implant to stay alive. Also he needs a
artificial lung, powerd by a cold fusion battery. ^^
he also survived but now hes half cyborg, maybe i should add that xD
thx ^^