Published Oct 23rd, 2012, 10/23/12 3:50 am
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He's been a vampire over 500 years. Everything happened fast.
Kayle the Red was traveling a path to new lands. It was Halloween night. It was raining and it was the full moon. Kayle heard a scream. He took his swrod and jumped off his horse. A huge mistake...
"Who's there?" Kayle asked. Then he saw a girl in blood. She was obviously dead... Kayle heard a rustle. He quickly turned 180 degrees and he saw a bunny. "That didn't make that sound." He thought. Then he saw a person.
"Who are you?" Kayle asked but the person didn't answer. The person took a step towards Kayle. "Don't come any closer!" He shouted but the person didn't answer. "I'm here for blood..." the person said. Kayle wasn't sure should he call that person sir or ma'am. "JUST TELL ME WHO YOU ARE! DON'T MAKE ME ATTACK YOU!" Kayle started to be scared now. "Blood..." the person said again. He/she had a hood on his/her face, so Kayle didn't see his/her face. He/she had a long white coat that was dirty from blood. "Now..." the person said. Kayle didn't have time to do anything. The person jumped on him and bit him.
Next time Kayle woke up he was in a cave. "What happened?" He asked. "Shhhh..." Don't talk. The person was there too. Kayle felt himself stronger than ever and he also saw that his skin had turned gray. "Let me teach you." The person said. Kayle didn't know why but he wanted to be taught. And so Kayle learned basic vampirism and necromancy but he wasn't satisfied. "I want more." he said then. "Your senses have awoken." the person said. "I'll guide you to a town of vampires. I don't want to teach you anymore." "Why?" Kayle asked. "You've taught me everything you know?" "No." the person said and smiled. Kayle had never seen his/her face. Everything he had seen was the persons mouth, cheeks and chin. "I've just taught you enough."
Finally the person guided Kayle to town of vampires and after he bacame very powerful after studying and learning there he got a nickname Dracula Warlord. But Kayle still doesn't know what the person really looks like. He may have seen him/her many times but he doesn't know it. He only knows what his/her smile looks like.
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Kayle the Red was traveling a path to new lands. It was Halloween night. It was raining and it was the full moon. Kayle heard a scream. He took his swrod and jumped off his horse. A huge mistake...
"Who's there?" Kayle asked. Then he saw a girl in blood. She was obviously dead... Kayle heard a rustle. He quickly turned 180 degrees and he saw a bunny. "That didn't make that sound." He thought. Then he saw a person.
"Who are you?" Kayle asked but the person didn't answer. The person took a step towards Kayle. "Don't come any closer!" He shouted but the person didn't answer. "I'm here for blood..." the person said. Kayle wasn't sure should he call that person sir or ma'am. "JUST TELL ME WHO YOU ARE! DON'T MAKE ME ATTACK YOU!" Kayle started to be scared now. "Blood..." the person said again. He/she had a hood on his/her face, so Kayle didn't see his/her face. He/she had a long white coat that was dirty from blood. "Now..." the person said. Kayle didn't have time to do anything. The person jumped on him and bit him.
Next time Kayle woke up he was in a cave. "What happened?" He asked. "Shhhh..." Don't talk. The person was there too. Kayle felt himself stronger than ever and he also saw that his skin had turned gray. "Let me teach you." The person said. Kayle didn't know why but he wanted to be taught. And so Kayle learned basic vampirism and necromancy but he wasn't satisfied. "I want more." he said then. "Your senses have awoken." the person said. "I'll guide you to a town of vampires. I don't want to teach you anymore." "Why?" Kayle asked. "You've taught me everything you know?" "No." the person said and smiled. Kayle had never seen his/her face. Everything he had seen was the persons mouth, cheeks and chin. "I've just taught you enough."
Finally the person guided Kayle to town of vampires and after he bacame very powerful after studying and learning there he got a nickname Dracula Warlord. But Kayle still doesn't know what the person really looks like. He may have seen him/her many times but he doesn't know it. He only knows what his/her smile looks like.
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Oh and I pick this one.
The Young Version Will Be Made By: NubNoobNewbMC
The Young Adult or Teen Version Will Be made By: TheSentinelsCorp Or Me
Then You do the old guys... which is that... :)
Be Sure To Make The Guys Look Old... Change The Name i Think
The Story Is Quite hard To Do..... Help! :D I Need ideas.