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War By the Cyberpunks by Pyrominecraft2
(All the names are Cyberpunked, I did my best to make then futuristic.)
2 Sides. 1 Winner.
It was in 3014 when war took place. It started in a alley way, filled with holograms of dumpsters.
" Get out of my way! " Peteforior Said.
" Yeah right. " Dereken said in a boastful way. "
Peteforior had enough. he blew his first hit on Dereken.
" Take that you pussy. "
" Oh no you didn't. "
The two men blasted hits from each other from head to toe. Pete blew blasts at Derek's stomach, while Derek aimed for the dingleberry. They fought for 8 hours until Derek said,
"I'll..be...right..back......"
Derek formed a gang called the The Notorious Killers. The gang had suits and hats. Of course, the hats and suits were made by a floating machine that can make basically anything.
The most Ironic part is that Peter formed his own gang too. Peter didn't like saying the word gang much so he said clan. The name was The Avenging Fighters.
Dereken and Peteforior came back to the same alleyway months later.
" So, I see you formed your own group too. " Dereken said Arrogantly.
" Yes, and we will defeat you. "
Derek laughed extremely hard and so did his members.
" Remember when your Mum said to never lie? You should tell me the truth. "
" Oh yes, sorry, here's the truth. I AM GOING to defeat you. "
Derek's face turned hot red.
" You shouldn't have said that. "
Derek blew the first hit and thus, they came into a brawl.
More people wanted to join and news about it were spreading all over the holographic world.
It was The Avenging Fighters versus The Notorious Killers.
Thanks, for reading my story, I really hope you enjoyed it!
LEGEND:
Red Side: The Notorious Killers
Black and White Side: The Avenging Fighters
CONCEPT:
The Skin:
I wanted to make a Cyberpunk skin, but at the same time I was trying to think outside the box. My definition of 'Outside the Box' is when you do something out of the ordinary. What I try to do is make it so it looks completely like no one elses. I looked at a lot of Cyberpunk entries and I said to myself, " All of these look almost the same, no offense of course. " I wanted to create something futuristic but at the same time different from everyone else's, and I came up with this skin.
The Story Line
Also, I wanted to make the story based in the future but almost had nothing to do with the future. Well, not completely nothing but something without flashing, superpowers and other futuristic stuff. It was hard to think of such an idea. At one point I didn't even think it was possible. I thought about everything and then I came up with Gangs and Alleys. I thought, " Are there even gangs and alleys in the Cyberpunk World? If so, Al Capone did a great job. " I made the story line as understanding as possible, but if you don't understand some stuff then you'll see why you don't.
Pictures of Both Suits:
Other Info:
I looked at other popular entries and it looks like I'm the only one competing as a Level One xD
I read the rules and I completely started from scratch. I used SkinEdit for my design, and I did NOT use Minershoes or Nova Skin.
Also, be sure to DIAMOND :D
And if you can, try to make this into the What's Hot section :D I really want people to read the concept and not just look at the skin.
I worked hard on this and I can't wait to participate in this contest.
War By the Cyberpunks by Pyrominecraft2
(All the names are Cyberpunked, I did my best to make then futuristic.)
2 Sides. 1 Winner.
It was in 3014 when war took place. It started in a alley way, filled with holograms of dumpsters.
" Get out of my way! " Peteforior Said.
" Yeah right. " Dereken said in a boastful way. "
Peteforior had enough. he blew his first hit on Dereken.
" Take that you pussy. "
" Oh no you didn't. "
The two men blasted hits from each other from head to toe. Pete blew blasts at Derek's stomach, while Derek aimed for the dingleberry. They fought for 8 hours until Derek said,
"I'll..be...right..back......"
Derek formed a gang called the The Notorious Killers. The gang had suits and hats. Of course, the hats and suits were made by a floating machine that can make basically anything.
The most Ironic part is that Peter formed his own gang too. Peter didn't like saying the word gang much so he said clan. The name was The Avenging Fighters.
Dereken and Peteforior came back to the same alleyway months later.
" So, I see you formed your own group too. " Dereken said Arrogantly.
" Yes, and we will defeat you. "
Derek laughed extremely hard and so did his members.
" Remember when your Mum said to never lie? You should tell me the truth. "
" Oh yes, sorry, here's the truth. I AM GOING to defeat you. "
Derek's face turned hot red.
" You shouldn't have said that. "
Derek blew the first hit and thus, they came into a brawl.
More people wanted to join and news about it were spreading all over the holographic world.
It was The Avenging Fighters versus The Notorious Killers.
Thanks, for reading my story, I really hope you enjoyed it!
LEGEND:
Red Side: The Notorious Killers
Black and White Side: The Avenging Fighters
CONCEPT:
The Skin:
I wanted to make a Cyberpunk skin, but at the same time I was trying to think outside the box. My definition of 'Outside the Box' is when you do something out of the ordinary. What I try to do is make it so it looks completely like no one elses. I looked at a lot of Cyberpunk entries and I said to myself, " All of these look almost the same, no offense of course. " I wanted to create something futuristic but at the same time different from everyone else's, and I came up with this skin.
The Story Line
Also, I wanted to make the story based in the future but almost had nothing to do with the future. Well, not completely nothing but something without flashing, superpowers and other futuristic stuff. It was hard to think of such an idea. At one point I didn't even think it was possible. I thought about everything and then I came up with Gangs and Alleys. I thought, " Are there even gangs and alleys in the Cyberpunk World? If so, Al Capone did a great job. " I made the story line as understanding as possible, but if you don't understand some stuff then you'll see why you don't.
Pictures of Both Suits:
The Avenging Fighters
The Notorious Killers
Other Info:
I looked at other popular entries and it looks like I'm the only one competing as a Level One xD
I read the rules and I completely started from scratch. I used SkinEdit for my design, and I did NOT use Minershoes or Nova Skin.
Also, be sure to DIAMOND :D
And if you can, try to make this into the What's Hot section :D I really want people to read the concept and not just look at the skin.
I worked hard on this and I can't wait to participate in this contest.
| Credit | SkinEdit |
| Gender | Male |
| Model | Steve |
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Update #2 : by Pyrominecraft2 11/12/2012 4:16:40 pmNov 12th, 2012
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