Red Man

This was done, on SkinEdit but my previewer still won't work so I tried to make something simple that still looked pretty cool. I was 'blind' when making this not knowing how it looked but I think it turned out well :) Any feedback is appreciated.

For your entertainment... I bring to you... a story called..

About Red Man!!!

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There once was woman named Sarah. She worked as a scientist for the company Apature Science. Seeing the bad that was starting to evolve from the laboratories, she decided to quit her job. But they wouldn't let her.
They secured her in a room, with no windows. It had all the building equipment, science, chemicals and other such things that she needed to continue her work. But really she had a plan, a plan to escape. Of course Sarah could of just built a bomb and used it against a wall to get out but, she knew if she did that it would draw toooooo much attention and the robot guards would be all over her.
She looked like she was doing regular work, but she had devised a plan so amazing! It was to build a robot, that could set her free, do her work, be a companion, protect her and more! When guards asked her what she was making, she told them a security robot. She wasn't lying, but she wasn't telling the whole truth either.
Finally! He was done! Red Man had been completed!! Sarah told him to save her, and that is just what he did! He scooped her up and put her in his safety compartment, and fired a hole in the wall, killed the guards, killed everyone else that sucked, and then he took her home! And Sarah and Red Man lived happily ever after.

Until Sarah got married, and Red Man got jealous and went insane.

THE END!!!

I hope you enjoyed my terrible story :D