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Published May 5th, 2014, 5/5/14 2:16 pm
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Story:
Once upon in space and time, there is a little boy with lots of pets. His name is Ren. He lives in a solitary place near the forest with his family. Ren have an elder brother, Kent, with the same hobby. He does have rats, spiders, snakes, etc as pets. His parents is not against on those exotic kind of pets, thus they support them in their hobby. Ren's favorite pet were rats. They were four.
One day, Ren is playing in the backyard. Noise from the forest are coming. He wonder what was it, but he's shocked to what he saw. There are animal hunter with lot of dead of animals on load. They were armed with gund, rifle, and dagger. The hunters went to their house to have cups of coffee.
They were welcomed by his parents, though they don't want to, and they were afraidof them. Ren's elder brother served them coffee with hesitation. With hatred in mind, Ren's elder brother ask the hunters, "What will you do with those unfortunate animals?"
"It's out of your business! They were just pieces coins for. They are unworthy to live. " A hunter replied.
"You're wrong! You are the ones unworthy to live" Kent answered with loud voice.
The hunter got pissed off. He is totally angry.
The hunter aim his gun to Kent, but Kent's father defended him.
"Who's unworthy to live? You? Or your father?" Another hunter told Kent.
Ren was afraid. Afraid of what's happening. He couldn't barely move his body nor his mouth. Their mother begs to the hunter to stop, but a tragic event happened. A hunter shoot Ren's mother on head, His father fight against but ended the same with Ren's mother. Ren is crying, and tried to hid himself because he couldn't do anything.
Kent was afraid and tried to run to find Ren, but he tripped and hit their pets. Some of the containers fell. The floor swarmed with their pets. Snakes, spider, and rats run everywhere. The hunters were even more pissed. They also kill Kent. And killed their pets, including Ren's favorite. The hunter set the house on fire to leave no traces of them. Almost all their pets were burned inside. But some of the rats manged to escape.
Ren saw the rats with tears on his eyes then he followed the rats to the forest. The rats were running and ot inside a cave. It was dark inside the cave but Ren still tried to call the rats. He is crying, because he couldn't do to what happened. He is too weak. He was too afraid. Crying, and crying, inside the cave he was finding the rats. With a pinch of light, far enough from the cave, Ren continue, but fell into a cliff inside the cave. Ren's body was heavilly injured. He might broke lot of his bones. He couldn't move. He was too weak. He could've done something. He decided to take revenge. Revenge after he gained enough power, but he died.
The guardians of the forest and the caves, could not believe to what heppened. A little boy died innocently, witnessed that horrible event that ended his family's lives. Ren is just a boy that love animals andcare for animals.
The guardians decided to give Ren a second chance to give those cruel people their lessons. They reincarnate Ren's spirit into a rat.
The rat was gold in color. Ren lives normally like that of a normal rat, but his power to revenge grows. As ren grows as a rat, his body became that of a human. He became half-rat, half-human. He trained himself inside the cave. He's now strong more than an elephant. The forest guardian amplified that strength to hundred by giving him the Vambrace of Ganesh and the Cape of Galapagos. He decided to go out of the underground cave to seek for revenge.
Fortunately, hunters were hunters, hunters hunt on forest, Ren easily find the hunters that killed his family. He brutally killed them severed their body.
Ren became a guardian of the forest, protecting animals from hunters. With his strenghth, he ended up killing those hunters. He is doing what the hunters did. He became a monster.
The guardians could not do the same thing with the hunters and Ren. They let Ren live. The guardians restrain him inside the cave. A chamber with no pathway. A chamber that was strengthened by the guardians that even the strenth of hundreds of elephants couldnt breakthrough. A chamber where he can see the forest. He could only do was outrage. His strength could make the surface move like a real earthquake. Everytime he sees animal hunters in the forest, an earthquake occurs.
That thing is what Ren can only do what he should really do, To keep animals safe in the forest.
Story behind the story/skin:
Undergrund creatures? I can't think of something amazing. My mind wasn't wonderful. Tsss. Ant? Alreadt taken. Mole? Taken Worm? Taken. Then I'll take rat. I guess? Though rat is common, the story will make it different.
Two weeks. I have two weeks, but I spent 11days thinking of the color, rather making the color palletes. It ended up, still a disappointment. But effort might work. I did a light shading and tried to make it near-realistic. I may end up failing. I tried my best. My best to make it look good.
The story was wandering only to a powerful rat. How I made the story? I don't know, XD That was pure imagination on my mind, I guess? I tried my best to make a good story, though I fail those kind of thing back in grade and high school. Might been from anime series I've seen. I might improve it with my spare time.
Please help me!
You may leave diamond if you liked the skin and story if not for my effort.
Thanks a lot. you help will be very well appreciated.
Story:
Once upon in space and time, there is a little boy with lots of pets. His name is Ren. He lives in a solitary place near the forest with his family. Ren have an elder brother, Kent, with the same hobby. He does have rats, spiders, snakes, etc as pets. His parents is not against on those exotic kind of pets, thus they support them in their hobby. Ren's favorite pet were rats. They were four.
One day, Ren is playing in the backyard. Noise from the forest are coming. He wonder what was it, but he's shocked to what he saw. There are animal hunter with lot of dead of animals on load. They were armed with gund, rifle, and dagger. The hunters went to their house to have cups of coffee.
They were welcomed by his parents, though they don't want to, and they were afraidof them. Ren's elder brother served them coffee with hesitation. With hatred in mind, Ren's elder brother ask the hunters, "What will you do with those unfortunate animals?"
"It's out of your business! They were just pieces coins for. They are unworthy to live. " A hunter replied.
"You're wrong! You are the ones unworthy to live" Kent answered with loud voice.
The hunter got pissed off. He is totally angry.
The hunter aim his gun to Kent, but Kent's father defended him.
"Who's unworthy to live? You? Or your father?" Another hunter told Kent.
Ren was afraid. Afraid of what's happening. He couldn't barely move his body nor his mouth. Their mother begs to the hunter to stop, but a tragic event happened. A hunter shoot Ren's mother on head, His father fight against but ended the same with Ren's mother. Ren is crying, and tried to hid himself because he couldn't do anything.
Kent was afraid and tried to run to find Ren, but he tripped and hit their pets. Some of the containers fell. The floor swarmed with their pets. Snakes, spider, and rats run everywhere. The hunters were even more pissed. They also kill Kent. And killed their pets, including Ren's favorite. The hunter set the house on fire to leave no traces of them. Almost all their pets were burned inside. But some of the rats manged to escape.
Ren saw the rats with tears on his eyes then he followed the rats to the forest. The rats were running and ot inside a cave. It was dark inside the cave but Ren still tried to call the rats. He is crying, because he couldn't do to what happened. He is too weak. He was too afraid. Crying, and crying, inside the cave he was finding the rats. With a pinch of light, far enough from the cave, Ren continue, but fell into a cliff inside the cave. Ren's body was heavilly injured. He might broke lot of his bones. He couldn't move. He was too weak. He could've done something. He decided to take revenge. Revenge after he gained enough power, but he died.
The guardians of the forest and the caves, could not believe to what heppened. A little boy died innocently, witnessed that horrible event that ended his family's lives. Ren is just a boy that love animals andcare for animals.
The guardians decided to give Ren a second chance to give those cruel people their lessons. They reincarnate Ren's spirit into a rat.
The rat was gold in color. Ren lives normally like that of a normal rat, but his power to revenge grows. As ren grows as a rat, his body became that of a human. He became half-rat, half-human. He trained himself inside the cave. He's now strong more than an elephant. The forest guardian amplified that strength to hundred by giving him the Vambrace of Ganesh and the Cape of Galapagos. He decided to go out of the underground cave to seek for revenge.
Fortunately, hunters were hunters, hunters hunt on forest, Ren easily find the hunters that killed his family. He brutally killed them severed their body.
Ren became a guardian of the forest, protecting animals from hunters. With his strenghth, he ended up killing those hunters. He is doing what the hunters did. He became a monster.
The guardians could not do the same thing with the hunters and Ren. They let Ren live. The guardians restrain him inside the cave. A chamber with no pathway. A chamber that was strengthened by the guardians that even the strenth of hundreds of elephants couldnt breakthrough. A chamber where he can see the forest. He could only do was outrage. His strength could make the surface move like a real earthquake. Everytime he sees animal hunters in the forest, an earthquake occurs.
That thing is what Ren can only do what he should really do, To keep animals safe in the forest.
Story behind the story/skin:
Undergrund creatures? I can't think of something amazing. My mind wasn't wonderful. Tsss. Ant? Alreadt taken. Mole? Taken Worm? Taken. Then I'll take rat. I guess? Though rat is common, the story will make it different.
Two weeks. I have two weeks, but I spent 11days thinking of the color, rather making the color palletes. It ended up, still a disappointment. But effort might work. I did a light shading and tried to make it near-realistic. I may end up failing. I tried my best. My best to make it look good.
The story was wandering only to a powerful rat. How I made the story? I don't know, XD That was pure imagination on my mind, I guess? I tried my best to make a good story, though I fail those kind of thing back in grade and high school. Might been from anime series I've seen. I might improve it with my spare time.
Please help me!
You may leave diamond if you liked the skin and story if not for my effort.
Thanks a lot. you help will be very well appreciated.
| Gender | Male |
| Format | Java |
| Model | Steve |
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