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A Lone Soul - LEGO Minecraft Cave Hanger Contest (2015)

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Killstr3aker01_'s Avatar Killstr3aker01_
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With such fury in one mans bloodshot, demented eyes, you'd think he would give up eventually.The ominous sounds from some sort of crazed creature sent a spine-chill down his back. Stephen was his name, and he was not alone. 

Stephen ignored the first grunt of what he thought to be his mind playing tricks, but as his opponent got closer, he realised without hesitating, he was being watched. Stephen didn't like fighting much, but he knew what he had gotten himself into. 

The cold, sharp sound of his iron-welded sword drew from his loose buckle, turning around ever so slowly, hands trembling. His heart dropped in an instant, to find a starving zombie, who glared his cold eyes right into Stephen's. The beast didn't move, but as Stephen looked down he found himself a monstrous spider-like creature, who also gawked at him. 

In a heartbeat Stephen swung his sword with immense power he never felt before. Adrenaline rushing through his body as his slashes hit his opponents in a matter of seconds. His eyes gleaming with fustration and rage, staring into the lifeless corpses of the atrocious creatures. He fell back as he realised, he was a murderer.

Daylight broke from the cracks of the revealing cave from the gloomy mineshaft, which showed Stephen's wholly white eyes. He was no longer what he used to be. He was furious with power.

He was no longer "Stephen"

The end. 
Credit244 words - not including periods/hyphons/spaces herobrine
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10/01/2015 4:51 pm
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GrayRemnant
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This is really well written.  Good luck to you!  ;)
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10/01/2015 6:17 pm
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Killstr3aker01_
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Thanks so much! Means a lot bro, same goes :)
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09/27/2015 7:14 pm
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AshleyAurora
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Hi, to be completely honest your story is very well-written and That does give you a great advantage. However, It is severly lacking Creativity. I do admire your work but I am just giving Advice. Good Luck.
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09/26/2015 7:13 am
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Dukkeh
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Woah!! I love this!
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09/26/2015 3:43 am
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Happy Walrus
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Great Blog

If Your Gonna Change The End Give The Zomb/Spider Some Character
I Don't Know, Hope It Helps  :)
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09/30/2015 4:26 pm
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Killstr3aker01_
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Cheers bro :D will keep that in mind.
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09/25/2015 12:53 pm
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blitzscrank
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surprised this doesnt have more diamonds, one of top stories submitted so far
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09/25/2015 3:15 pm
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Killstr3aker01_
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Thank you blitzcrank, really appreciate it dude <3
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09/23/2015 5:47 pm
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Masq
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A well-detailed and overall story :) I really like the descriptions; they make a difference and are hard to pull off in a limited 250 word story. The ending seems particularly abrupt though, was this just because of the word count? 



Nice blog :)
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09/24/2015 2:59 pm
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Killstr3aker01_
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Thank you very much :) Yes I didn't want to go overboard but honestly I still need a better ending and more detailing, I basiclly lost interest in the end, but thank you man!
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