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iixRose's Avatar iixRose
Level 30 : Artisan Geek
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.:Cold Stare:.


I stared at the wall as my blue hair blew in the wind. My window was open, as i got up to close it. I would normally shiver but today I was doomed. I had to go off to war and become a "superwomen" Whats a superwomen? A superwomen is a female who goes into war who was chosen out of 1,000,000,000,000,000 females. And I'm the one that gets picked? I sighed and changed into my uniform. I smoothed it out as someone knocked on my door.  I opened the door dressed. It was the coach. He yelled "YOUR LATE." I turned around looking at the time. It was 7:00?! An hour late!? I groaned "I need sleep, coach." Coach said quickly "LETS GO!" We walked down the halls where i peered threw the glass. I saw lots of other females but they all were different. Some had cat tails and cat ears. Some had even a pumpkin on their heads and katanas stabbed in them. I don't get it! Why am i here? I'm perfectly normal. We walked into the armory. He gave me a gun "Last time i will be seeing ya little girl." He smirked at me as I narrowed my eyebrows. He opened his mouth and said the last words i'll ever hear. "Be a good soldier." I ran out onto the battlefeild with my uniform on. I was brave but then dived for a wall. I can't do this! I'mma die! I shot a person down. "Oh my gosh" i said and got up shooting 6 guys down. Another ran behind me but i shot them down. All the other females were dead laying on the ground. I looked at them with a red face. I heard a  bullet shot then i felt and hole in my head. I fell to the ground. With a cold stare I looked up at the sky slowly dieing. My blue hair on my cheeks. I fell asleep into a new world.

so sad omg ;-;
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12/19/2015 4:29 am
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birds
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mmh yes there's lots of grammar errors but the story is really well told ;u;
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10/01/2015 6:19 pm
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xAubrey
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Despite the grammar errors, this was an awesome paragraph. I love it and thanks for sharing it on Planet Minecraft!
- xAubrey
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10/01/2015 6:41 pm
Level 30 : Artisan Geek
iixRose
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I'm so sorry for the grammar errors, i'm still in school >o>
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