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Death Follows - A Literary Poem in Rhyming Verse

Published Oct 3rd, 2021, 10/3/21 8:47 pm
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Death Follows


I like to think I’m normal

And I must admit, I’ve tried

Yet when I’m looking back on life

And looking deep inside

I’ve just begun to realize

How much I’ve nearly died


It started oh so long ago

The day that I was born

When then some random doctor guy

Looked on my head in scorn


He looked up to my parents

With a sadness in his eyes

And with a voice quite dull he said

“This is the one who dies”

“For this scar warns of cancer”

“And this face here screams of worse”

“Yes I foretell, and I know well, he’ll end up in a hearse.”


Well I’ve avoided cancer

And I’d like to say I’m free

But seems a life of luxury

Was not the life for me

For since, I’ve broken many bones

And busted many knees

And while I’m proud I’m not the type for falling out of trees

I must admit, my greatest fault?

It’s simply allergies.

For though I’ve fled from burning and I’ve run through many storms

I simply say, on ended day, a poison never warns.


So there I say my troubles

And I’ve given only few

But that is why

In tongues of rhyme

I’m not the same as you.

CreditMy school for assigning this
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10/05/2021 1:02 am
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Cardinal System
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It's always nice to find another skilled the art of poetry. I love your poem. Individuality is something our modern world lacks so much. It's not easy being different, but it is much more interesting to say the least. I love expressing myself through poetry, although it's only ever been a school assignment once... Anyway, +2!
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10/04/2021 10:21 am
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BLACKSHMAD
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You need to become a writer
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10/04/2021 8:30 am
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StarberrySoda
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Oml this was really good.
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10/04/2021 8:26 am
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WaffleBear
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Wow, this is pretty cool dude.
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10/04/2021 8:20 am
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10/04/2021 8:08 am
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Pleasenotme
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This is great.

I mean the poem, not the events it describes.
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10/03/2021 9:58 pm
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-Rae- deactivated
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:O yoooo that's actually such a good poem what
is it about you?
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10/03/2021 10:00 pm
Level 55 : Grandmaster Birb
chickenpants93
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YUP
ITS ALL TRUE
AND I LEFT STUFF OUT RAE
I LEFT STUFF OUT
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10/03/2021 10:01 pm
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oooof xD

me over here having never broken a bone or had any other major injury/sickness
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10/03/2021 10:06 pm
Level 55 : Grandmaster Birb
chickenpants93
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Loll
most of the stuff that happened to me was totally out of my control lol
im not exactly the type of guy to get into dangerous situations
HOWEVER
I AM THE GUY WHO COMEDICALLY CAN SURVIVE ANYTHING

so I hardly realized HOW MANY NEAR DEATH OR WEIRD MEDICAL RELATED EXPERIENCES I’ve even had till just recently lol

just assumed stuff was normal

sometime I should tell you about the day I woke up without the use of my legs lol that’s a great story but I’m tired lol
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