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Love poem contest entry: Love from above

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TheMcPig's Avatar TheMcPig
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I stumbled upon a rock one day
and fell into a trench,
I landed in some water
and saw a little bench.

I sat on the little bench
and took a look around,
and there, on the top of the trench
guess who I found:

a kind, pretty girl
with hair like a diamond sword's shine,
she helped me up out of the trench
and asked if I wanted to dine.

That night, the music played
on the jukebox quiet,
the girl, Rose, looked at me
and then I realized I knew it.

She had a glimmer in her eyes
and a smile like a happy vex,
and then she hugged and kissed me
and soon what came next:

One year after this day
we became married,
we rode home in our flying machine
and got a dog named Harry

Fast-forward twenty years
and still living on,
an old man, with a paper
and a wife, who is gone.

However, what still puzzles me
when I first fell in the trench,
why on Earth, and how on Earth
was there a little bench?




Happy Valentines Day!
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02/03/2021 4:48 pmhistory
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Cardinal System
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Not what I was expecting. Sweat, short, not too munch fancy language, and a twist conclusion. It all ties together so nicely and I can't help but feel affection for an inanimate little bench. +2
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02/03/2021 8:40 pm
Level 52 : Grandmaster Baconator
TheMcPig
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The trench and bench tied it all together :)
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