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My Little Dashie
(FICTION)
REAL MY LITTLE DASHIE BY:
ROBCakeran53
TABLE OF CONTENTS
Chapter 1 "The Find
Chapter 2 "Outcome of the Party
Chapter 3 "Trying to fly"
Chapter 4 "The friend"
Chapter 5 "She hates me now"
Chapter 6 "She loves me, she loves me not"
Chapter 7 "Why, why now?"
Chapter 8 "Final Goodbyes"
Chapter 9 "You will always be, My Little Dashie"
Chapter 1 "The Find"
I am just a normal brony watching My Little Pony: Frendship is Magic, and really excited for My Little Pony: Equestria Girls. But I am really concerned if it is just a cliffhanger and it was a troll. But I can't be 100% sure on that. Oop. I have to go to work now. What I do at my job is basicly make shows like My Little Pony. I haven't told any of my friends at work that I am a brony and I am working on this show called: "My Little Brony: Fans are Magic." Basicly what it is about is bronies being turned into ponies and being sent to Ponyville. They find the 6 (Rainbow Dash, Twilight Sparkle, Fluttershy, Applejack, Rarity, and Pinkie Pie) and become friends with them. It is currently in development. Ugh, it is 2:30 already. Gotta go home. But as I walk home, I find this box and says: "Give to good home". I am all of a sudden like: Why would someone give this baby away? I walk up to the box, not letting anyone know, and as I look into the box, it is not a baby. I couldn't belive my eyes. It was Rainbow Dash. But she was a filly. More like a baby. She saw me, and got REALLY scared. I couldn't just let someone else take Dash and slowly KILL her. So, being careful, I take Dash and take my coat off and put it on her. Dash gets REALLY scared and tries to fly away. She can't fly, so then she gives up and rests in my coat, almost going back to sleep. When I get home, I put Dash on the floor and let her explore the house. She liked it, only because of two things. 1. The furniture, she liked it. 2. It was warm. She fell asleep not to long. My phone started ringing. Apparently, Dash never woke up. I answered, and it was my friend. He said: "We still going to your house? The party is today." I feel like an idiot. How Am I supposed to hide Rainbow Dash? Although, one of my friends is a brony, so I will tell him about Dash. But I have to tell him NOT to tell everyone else. They were coming in 15 min. Dangit, it's been 14 min. and I haven't hid Dash. So I hide her in my room, locking it. I have the keys. They come. I feel okay now.
Chapter 2 "Outcome of the party"
The party was horrible. First, one of my friends said: Let's go play Poker! I HAD to agree because he would hate me forever. So I play poker, lose HALF of my money. I had $1,000 and now have $500. Ugh, I was waiting to find something for Dash. Speaking of Rainbow Dash, here is the 2nd reason the party sucked. They found Rainbow Dash. Now, ALL of my friends hate me now except the friend who is a brony. I feel like an idiot for taking Rainbow Dash. But I had to. She had no home. So, now I quit watching MLP untill somepony would find Dash and take her or she passes away at my house. Apparently, she got a little bigger since I got her and she says: Dadda. It's cute. I loved her so much, that EVERYWHERE I go, except my job, I take her. Yes, to the park, to my friends house, to my room, EVERYWHERE. But I make sure to hide her. I feel gratefull for taking Dash. She made my brony heart glow. I love her.
Chapter 3 "Trying to fly"
5 years have past, and Dash is now a filly, she can talk and eat hard stuff like tacos. She loves tacos. She said to me: "Daddy, can I try to fly today?" I diddn't want Dash to get hurt, but, dumbfully, I said yes. Like I said, she did get hurt. As in, ALMOST BREAKING A WING. So I tell her: You aren't allowed to fly untill the age of 10. She gets all mad and goes upstairs to my room. She is pissed. She will not talk to me for 1 month.
Now Dash is 10 years old now, finally not grumpy anymore, and starts flying. This time, she doesn't hurt herself. Actually, on the 3rd try, she can finally fly without any mistakes. I am so proud of Dash. I go get lunch for the two of us. She stood home. She played with her toys. When I got home, she was happy that I got McDonalds. She got Chicken Nuggets. I got the McChicken. We shared fries, and got her a mini-sprite. I got myself a Coke. We had a fun time. Alot.
Chapter 4 "The friend"
Dash has improved since the time she finnaly succeded in flying. She is now 12. She can fly really fast. I tested her to see if she could fly around the world in 10 seconds. She done it in 5. THAT was jawdropping. Dash said to me: "Can I you call me Dashie, daddy?" I said yes. She loves me forever now.
At the age of 14, she is allowed to have a phone. She makes a new friend, but I get suspicious because she never told me what the name of the friend was. I go ask her. She says: "His name is Jack." Oh my god. She went outside and found my brony friend. I say: "Why, why would you go outside?" Dash said: "I got bored." I said: "Well you diddn't as me permission. Dash says: "Do I SERIOUSLY have to?" I say: "Yes, Dashie." Dash says: "Well I am 14 now. I can do whatever I want to do now." I say: "Just because you are 14, doesn't mean that you can do whatever you want to." Dash gets real mad. She said: "WELL THAT IS NOT FAIR." I yell: "WELL I DO NOT CARE, RAINBOW DASH." She got REAL pissed. She yelled: "DON'T YOU CALL ME BY MY REAL NAME!" I say:"I AM YOUR FATHER. I CAN DO WHATEVER I WANT TO YOU." Dash Yells:"WELL, IF SO, I HATE YOU." I yell:"FINE, HATE ME ALL YOU WANT, FICTIONAL PONY FROM A TV SHOW." I am dumb. I shouldn't have said that. Dash yells:"WHY! WHY DAD, WHY DID YOU SAY THAT?! I AM NOT FICTIONAL. I AM HERE. YOU SEE ME." Dash starts to cry and flies away from the house, going away. I start to cry. I later yell to Dash:"PLEASE COME BACK, I DIDDN'T MEAN IT!!!!!!!!!"Sometimes, I wish I was dead.
Chapter 5 "She hates me now"
She has not come back ever since she left the house. I am VERY worried for her. I look outside. I see LITERAL black clouds. Oh god. She is out there alone, with NOBODY. She can get KILLED! I try to find her, not caring if everyone in town knows that I am a brony. I yell: "DASH! WHERE ARE YOU?! DAAAASH?! DAAASH!" I hear rustling. Then a boom. I look where it was. There she is. Dash. I go to her, and she says: "GET AWAY FROM ME." I am shocked. She hates me now. I say: "What is wrong, Dashie?" Dash cries and says: "You are right, I am just a fictional character. I should die now." I say: "Don't say that, I diddn't mean it. You are right, YOU are real. If you weren't this would be a dream." Oh god. When if this is a dream. No, It can't be. She has lived with me for 14 years. It can't be true.
Dash says:"I-I need some time alone." She pushes me away. She flies away again. I am sad, now. Alone, in the rain. Why did I yell that she is fictional? Why, I feel like a dummy. Well, it's too late now. She hates me now. There is no changing that.
Chapter 6 "She loves me, she loves me not"
It has been 3 days since she has been gone. Apparently, it is still raining. I hate myself. But now, I can probably change things. I say in my mind, using 2 words and saying it 5 times like this: "She loves me, she loves me not, she loves me, she loves me not, SHE LOVES ME!" I go find her. She is back where she pushed me at. I go to her. I say: "Dash, it is fine, can you forgive me?" Dash says nothing. After 5 seconds, she turns around, and says to me: "Dad, do you still love me?" I say: of course I love you, Dashie!" She loves me for eternity. We go back home. She needs to shower. Badly. She showers
6 years has passed, and Dash is now 20 years old. We are watching TV now, and all of a sudden, it shuts off, and there is a ball of light on my carpet. When it stops blinding me, I am surprised. Oh my god. It's them
Chapter 7 "Why, why now?"
Mother of god, the other 5 of the 6 are here. And so is Princess Celestia. Applejack says: "Dang, where are we anyway" Pinkie Pie says: "Dunno, but I am suuure glad that we are here!" Rarity is focused on the living room. Its so nice. Fluttershy says: "Um, what is this place?" Twilight Sparkle says: "Earth." Finnaly, the princess says: "We are here to take Rainbow Dash." The 5 try to give Dash a hug, but Dash backs away and says: "GET AWAY! WHO ARE YOU?!" The 5 are stunned. Applejack said: "Man, we came here to get you and now you don't remember us?" Dash said:"D-DAD? WHO ARE THEESE PONIES?!" The 5 and Celestia are stunned, again. Celestia says:"So,that is why she doesn't remember us." Dang. She has been with me for 20 years and now has to leave. I knew it. I predicted that she would either get taken away or she will pass away in my house. Number 1 guess is right. Dangit.
When Pinkie passed by me, I happened to sniff her mane, but she diddn't care. The myths are true. Pinkie's mane does smell like cotton candy. No wonder why she is a party pony. Anyway, back to the 5. Twilight said: "You've gotten bigger the last time we saw you." Dash said:"Well, DUH! I am 20 years old!" Okay, so now Dash and the 5 and Celestia get silent. Awkard, to think. Dash finnaly said: "What now?" Celestia said:"It's time for you to go." There goes my brony heart, broken.
Chapter 8 "Final Goodbyes"
Dash starts to cry. "Dad, do I HAVE to go?" "Yes,"I say, "you have to go." Dash said:"NO! I WILL NOT. NOT AFTER WHAT YOU DONE TO ME, CARED. ALL OF YOU PONIES, GO NOW! I CAN'T STAND YOU ANYMORE!" Celestia said:"Well, there is no choice but for you to go now." "No, not now..." is what Dashie said. Dashie said:"Daddy, don't let them take me!" I, sadly, say: "I am sorry, Dashie, but now is the time for you to go." Dash hugs me. "I'll miss you, Dashie." "I'll miss you too, Daddy." Oh.... she called me Daddy. All of a sudden, Celestia puts her horn on my chest, and now, I feel different. I see them, still remember Dashie. Twilight puts her horn on Dash's head. Boom. A blinding light. It's done. She's gone.
Chapter 9 "You will always be, My Little Dashie"
No progress since Dash has left. All of my pictures of Dash are gone. Even the ones in the picture book. I guess Celestia has used a spell that erases all pictures and memories of Dashie. It's weird,becauseI remember Rainbow Dash. But she is safer now. Not in this world where she can die easily. The box is still there after 20 years. I am now 38. I really miss Dashie. But she is in a better place now, Equestria. I'll miss her. Hm? A message, that Dash wrote.
Dear Dad,
All of the times we had together, It was fun. Like you finding me, me starting to fly, andsucceeding, me finding the friend, Sorry for getting you mad, Dad. :(. Dad, since you have been taking care of me, I have told Celestia that you can keep one picture. It is the picture of thetimeline. From me being a foal, a filly, a pre-teen, a teen, and now. I really miss you, Daddy. I love you
Your fastest daughter,
Rainbow Dash
I cry. That note was nice. I love her now. But she is now with her true friends. But now,
She is a memory
And she will always be,
My Little Dashie.
The End.
If you want the remake of My Little Dashie II, subscribe!
My Little Dashie
(FICTION)
REAL MY LITTLE DASHIE BY:
ROBCakeran53
TABLE OF CONTENTS
Chapter 1 "The Find
Chapter 2 "Outcome of the Party
Chapter 3 "Trying to fly"
Chapter 4 "The friend"
Chapter 5 "She hates me now"
Chapter 6 "She loves me, she loves me not"
Chapter 7 "Why, why now?"
Chapter 8 "Final Goodbyes"
Chapter 9 "You will always be, My Little Dashie"
Chapter 1 "The Find"
I am just a normal brony watching My Little Pony: Frendship is Magic, and really excited for My Little Pony: Equestria Girls. But I am really concerned if it is just a cliffhanger and it was a troll. But I can't be 100% sure on that. Oop. I have to go to work now. What I do at my job is basicly make shows like My Little Pony. I haven't told any of my friends at work that I am a brony and I am working on this show called: "My Little Brony: Fans are Magic." Basicly what it is about is bronies being turned into ponies and being sent to Ponyville. They find the 6 (Rainbow Dash, Twilight Sparkle, Fluttershy, Applejack, Rarity, and Pinkie Pie) and become friends with them. It is currently in development. Ugh, it is 2:30 already. Gotta go home. But as I walk home, I find this box and says: "Give to good home". I am all of a sudden like: Why would someone give this baby away? I walk up to the box, not letting anyone know, and as I look into the box, it is not a baby. I couldn't belive my eyes. It was Rainbow Dash. But she was a filly. More like a baby. She saw me, and got REALLY scared. I couldn't just let someone else take Dash and slowly KILL her. So, being careful, I take Dash and take my coat off and put it on her. Dash gets REALLY scared and tries to fly away. She can't fly, so then she gives up and rests in my coat, almost going back to sleep. When I get home, I put Dash on the floor and let her explore the house. She liked it, only because of two things. 1. The furniture, she liked it. 2. It was warm. She fell asleep not to long. My phone started ringing. Apparently, Dash never woke up. I answered, and it was my friend. He said: "We still going to your house? The party is today." I feel like an idiot. How Am I supposed to hide Rainbow Dash? Although, one of my friends is a brony, so I will tell him about Dash. But I have to tell him NOT to tell everyone else. They were coming in 15 min. Dangit, it's been 14 min. and I haven't hid Dash. So I hide her in my room, locking it. I have the keys. They come. I feel okay now.
Chapter 2 "Outcome of the party"
The party was horrible. First, one of my friends said: Let's go play Poker! I HAD to agree because he would hate me forever. So I play poker, lose HALF of my money. I had $1,000 and now have $500. Ugh, I was waiting to find something for Dash. Speaking of Rainbow Dash, here is the 2nd reason the party sucked. They found Rainbow Dash. Now, ALL of my friends hate me now except the friend who is a brony. I feel like an idiot for taking Rainbow Dash. But I had to. She had no home. So, now I quit watching MLP untill somepony would find Dash and take her or she passes away at my house. Apparently, she got a little bigger since I got her and she says: Dadda. It's cute. I loved her so much, that EVERYWHERE I go, except my job, I take her. Yes, to the park, to my friends house, to my room, EVERYWHERE. But I make sure to hide her. I feel gratefull for taking Dash. She made my brony heart glow. I love her.
Chapter 3 "Trying to fly"
5 years have past, and Dash is now a filly, she can talk and eat hard stuff like tacos. She loves tacos. She said to me: "Daddy, can I try to fly today?" I diddn't want Dash to get hurt, but, dumbfully, I said yes. Like I said, she did get hurt. As in, ALMOST BREAKING A WING. So I tell her: You aren't allowed to fly untill the age of 10. She gets all mad and goes upstairs to my room. She is pissed. She will not talk to me for 1 month.
Now Dash is 10 years old now, finally not grumpy anymore, and starts flying. This time, she doesn't hurt herself. Actually, on the 3rd try, she can finally fly without any mistakes. I am so proud of Dash. I go get lunch for the two of us. She stood home. She played with her toys. When I got home, she was happy that I got McDonalds. She got Chicken Nuggets. I got the McChicken. We shared fries, and got her a mini-sprite. I got myself a Coke. We had a fun time. Alot.
Chapter 4 "The friend"
Dash has improved since the time she finnaly succeded in flying. She is now 12. She can fly really fast. I tested her to see if she could fly around the world in 10 seconds. She done it in 5. THAT was jawdropping. Dash said to me: "Can I you call me Dashie, daddy?" I said yes. She loves me forever now.
At the age of 14, she is allowed to have a phone. She makes a new friend, but I get suspicious because she never told me what the name of the friend was. I go ask her. She says: "His name is Jack." Oh my god. She went outside and found my brony friend. I say: "Why, why would you go outside?" Dash said: "I got bored." I said: "Well you diddn't as me permission. Dash says: "Do I SERIOUSLY have to?" I say: "Yes, Dashie." Dash says: "Well I am 14 now. I can do whatever I want to do now." I say: "Just because you are 14, doesn't mean that you can do whatever you want to." Dash gets real mad. She said: "WELL THAT IS NOT FAIR." I yell: "WELL I DO NOT CARE, RAINBOW DASH." She got REAL pissed. She yelled: "DON'T YOU CALL ME BY MY REAL NAME!" I say:"I AM YOUR FATHER. I CAN DO WHATEVER I WANT TO YOU." Dash Yells:"WELL, IF SO, I HATE YOU." I yell:"FINE, HATE ME ALL YOU WANT, FICTIONAL PONY FROM A TV SHOW." I am dumb. I shouldn't have said that. Dash yells:"WHY! WHY DAD, WHY DID YOU SAY THAT?! I AM NOT FICTIONAL. I AM HERE. YOU SEE ME." Dash starts to cry and flies away from the house, going away. I start to cry. I later yell to Dash:"PLEASE COME BACK, I DIDDN'T MEAN IT!!!!!!!!!"Sometimes, I wish I was dead.
Chapter 5 "She hates me now"
She has not come back ever since she left the house. I am VERY worried for her. I look outside. I see LITERAL black clouds. Oh god. She is out there alone, with NOBODY. She can get KILLED! I try to find her, not caring if everyone in town knows that I am a brony. I yell: "DASH! WHERE ARE YOU?! DAAAASH?! DAAASH!" I hear rustling. Then a boom. I look where it was. There she is. Dash. I go to her, and she says: "GET AWAY FROM ME." I am shocked. She hates me now. I say: "What is wrong, Dashie?" Dash cries and says: "You are right, I am just a fictional character. I should die now." I say: "Don't say that, I diddn't mean it. You are right, YOU are real. If you weren't this would be a dream." Oh god. When if this is a dream. No, It can't be. She has lived with me for 14 years. It can't be true.
Dash says:"I-I need some time alone." She pushes me away. She flies away again. I am sad, now. Alone, in the rain. Why did I yell that she is fictional? Why, I feel like a dummy. Well, it's too late now. She hates me now. There is no changing that.
Chapter 6 "She loves me, she loves me not"
It has been 3 days since she has been gone. Apparently, it is still raining. I hate myself. But now, I can probably change things. I say in my mind, using 2 words and saying it 5 times like this: "She loves me, she loves me not, she loves me, she loves me not, SHE LOVES ME!" I go find her. She is back where she pushed me at. I go to her. I say: "Dash, it is fine, can you forgive me?" Dash says nothing. After 5 seconds, she turns around, and says to me: "Dad, do you still love me?" I say: of course I love you, Dashie!" She loves me for eternity. We go back home. She needs to shower. Badly. She showers
6 years has passed, and Dash is now 20 years old. We are watching TV now, and all of a sudden, it shuts off, and there is a ball of light on my carpet. When it stops blinding me, I am surprised. Oh my god. It's them
Chapter 7 "Why, why now?"
Mother of god, the other 5 of the 6 are here. And so is Princess Celestia. Applejack says: "Dang, where are we anyway" Pinkie Pie says: "Dunno, but I am suuure glad that we are here!" Rarity is focused on the living room. Its so nice. Fluttershy says: "Um, what is this place?" Twilight Sparkle says: "Earth." Finnaly, the princess says: "We are here to take Rainbow Dash." The 5 try to give Dash a hug, but Dash backs away and says: "GET AWAY! WHO ARE YOU?!" The 5 are stunned. Applejack said: "Man, we came here to get you and now you don't remember us?" Dash said:"D-DAD? WHO ARE THEESE PONIES?!" The 5 and Celestia are stunned, again. Celestia says:"So,that is why she doesn't remember us." Dang. She has been with me for 20 years and now has to leave. I knew it. I predicted that she would either get taken away or she will pass away in my house. Number 1 guess is right. Dangit.
When Pinkie passed by me, I happened to sniff her mane, but she diddn't care. The myths are true. Pinkie's mane does smell like cotton candy. No wonder why she is a party pony. Anyway, back to the 5. Twilight said: "You've gotten bigger the last time we saw you." Dash said:"Well, DUH! I am 20 years old!" Okay, so now Dash and the 5 and Celestia get silent. Awkard, to think. Dash finnaly said: "What now?" Celestia said:"It's time for you to go." There goes my brony heart, broken.
Chapter 8 "Final Goodbyes"
Dash starts to cry. "Dad, do I HAVE to go?" "Yes,"I say, "you have to go." Dash said:"NO! I WILL NOT. NOT AFTER WHAT YOU DONE TO ME, CARED. ALL OF YOU PONIES, GO NOW! I CAN'T STAND YOU ANYMORE!" Celestia said:"Well, there is no choice but for you to go now." "No, not now..." is what Dashie said. Dashie said:"Daddy, don't let them take me!" I, sadly, say: "I am sorry, Dashie, but now is the time for you to go." Dash hugs me. "I'll miss you, Dashie." "I'll miss you too, Daddy." Oh.... she called me Daddy. All of a sudden, Celestia puts her horn on my chest, and now, I feel different. I see them, still remember Dashie. Twilight puts her horn on Dash's head. Boom. A blinding light. It's done. She's gone.
Chapter 9 "You will always be, My Little Dashie"
No progress since Dash has left. All of my pictures of Dash are gone. Even the ones in the picture book. I guess Celestia has used a spell that erases all pictures and memories of Dashie. It's weird,becauseI remember Rainbow Dash. But she is safer now. Not in this world where she can die easily. The box is still there after 20 years. I am now 38. I really miss Dashie. But she is in a better place now, Equestria. I'll miss her. Hm? A message, that Dash wrote.
Dear Dad,
All of the times we had together, It was fun. Like you finding me, me starting to fly, andsucceeding, me finding the friend, Sorry for getting you mad, Dad. :(. Dad, since you have been taking care of me, I have told Celestia that you can keep one picture. It is the picture of thetimeline. From me being a foal, a filly, a pre-teen, a teen, and now. I really miss you, Daddy. I love you
Your fastest daughter,
Rainbow Dash
I cry. That note was nice. I love her now. But she is now with her true friends. But now,
She is a memory
And she will always be,
My Little Dashie.
The End.
If you want the remake of My Little Dashie II, subscribe!
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