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Of Clouds and Creepers

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hope you all like this, I've been working on it for a while.

please comment with opinions.

Prologue


The clouds turned a dark orange as the setting sun descended into the horizon.


A scream echoed in the distance. Through the clouds, an airborne vessel appeared, seemingly bringing black storm clouds with it. It resembled a pirate ship, but instead of sails and masts, it had what looked like fins on the sides, and gigantic fans on the rear. One of which had stopped working, and the other was on fire. The entire craft was plummeting downwards, its controls long since workable. Yet, a lone skeletal figure was trying. Clad in leather armor, it was desperately holding onto a rope connected to part of the sail with one hand, the wheel in the other. It was standing over slightly smaller, similar skeleton. Behind the ship Lightning suddenly lit up the surrounding area and a gigantic winged creature flashed for a fraction of a second. Booming thunder caught the skeleton off-guard, and it slipped onto the floor. By the time the skeleton could regain its balance, the ship was headed straight for the surface of an island nestled among darkening clouds.
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04/11/2012 8:18 am
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MIKEYMK
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its good , but make it longer
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04/11/2012 4:01 pm
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verdecraze
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this is only the introduction. if i get enough support i will upload the first chapter.
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03/04/2012 10:59 pm
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verdecraze
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please consider reviewing so i can know whether or not to put up the first chapter.
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03/03/2012 10:04 am
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verdecraze
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please leave a comment to tell me how good or bad I'm doing!
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03/21/2012 9:17 am
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snorlax3d
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This is pretty good.
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03/21/2012 4:23 pm
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verdecraze
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thanks! i thought it had been lost in the sea of submissions, and it's great to hear your feedback.
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