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Smile tookaway.

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This is a story about smile dog of creepy pasta.
This is a horror story so be aware it can be really scary.
I warn you already. Please don not delete this because I already warned you about it.
Have fun.

Creepy Pasta: Smile Dog

Smile took away.

Prologue:
In the howling forest. Abandoned and sacred. There where slender lives.
In his evil park was a even scarier doom.
While one young girl luckily enough found the pages and drove away.
But that was not the only thing she found. A little disc somewhere in the forest called: Smile.jpg.
While she got home traumatized and al she looked for a computer and put the disc in.
One weird picture of a dog appeared. It changed her life.
While she slept the dog keep coming. A terrifying smile in the dark.
When she woke up a red creature was there and attacked.
In the hospital she survived and could never laugh again.
A year later she still did not smile and the injuries finally killed her and gave her peace.

While people just moved in their new house and got rid of the furniture and threw it to the dump.
Some people sad the house was haunted. That a strange laughing creature lived there.





At the dump is where the story starts. In the dump is no one to see in miles.
Except for one boy, his name was Christopher. Christopher was just a normal boy.
He actually was nice but small and weak.
He was naïve and interested in everything what was strange.
Chris was not a happy person he ran out of school on a daily basis, he was bullied.
He ran to that smelly rat hole because he thought no one would find him there.
While he slipped of a pile of dirt he found an old computer. Next to it was a diskette: Smile.jpg.
He was curious what it was and took it home.

While he should be doing his homework he took the CD and what was on it was horrifying.
A strange wolf like red monster with a smile a clown would wonder how.
He was afraid to tell his parents. When he would tell them they ask how he got it.
At the moment there was no possibility than get back to his work.
that night was a nightmare a big smile in the dark was watching him and it followed him where he went. He woke up in a shock. He thought that it could not be true.

At school he had one friend. A girl Amelia. Christopher told her the story.
School was a pain for him. While he got kicked around the room like usual came an extra problem.
When the class was quiet during the lessons he keep seeing the horrifying smile of the dog.
After school let Chris see the picture to Amelia.
It was weird how it went. They both got scared and sat on his bed. Talking about what it could be.
Eventually she slept over to keep Chris company. In that night they both dreamed different.
The nightmare Christopher had is now Amelia`s. But Chris had his next dream.
He lays in his bad and one huge paw was in his chest. He looked up and saw the dog.
With his big smile he nods. They woke up.
While Amelia was traumatized for a second while Christopher took the disc where was suddenly was written on: o Keep spreading the word.`
At school they were both quiet and shocked. While they keep repeating their nightmares in their heads. That day they promised that they would stay together for the howl week.
That night Christopher and Amelia did not sad a thing about the monstrous creature.
No nightmare for both of them. But when they woke up they saw something that amazed their own eyes.

In huge red written letters stood :o I commanded you!`
They both ran to his parents when he heard his father scream.
Chris`s mother died. Gigantic bites was taken out of the mother and scratches taken by enormous claws.
Both the kids opened their eyes and noticed. The blood of his mother was ink of red letters on his wall.
The news interviewed the kids about the death.
Now Chris listened to the demon and sad that a evil monster with a scary smile killed his mother.
Everyone told them Chris was crazy. The father got stuck in prison because he was considered guilty.

The life of Amelia and Christopher changed. Amelia was an orphan and had nothing to lose.
But even she felt something for someone. She felt something for one person, Chris.
The third night.
Christopher dreamed his first nightmare but this time the smile slowly disappeared. Amelia had the opposite. She had a terrible dream.
A maze a forest where Smile dog lived in. She got haunted. All she could do was run.
But she could not escape the red death. One big slash of smile dogs claw came at her.
She woke up. And she saw the only thing what mend something to her lying dead in his bed.
Chris died.

Amelia had a trauma for life. She never got over it.
She got crazy, sad and confused . She could not smile anymore.
1 year
2 years
10 years
40 years she did not smiled. She lived lonely and unnoticed.
She got sick of it. She got to the house of Christopher where all the terror happened.
She stood on the roof and jumped of her last day came. This was the story.

Smile dog, a creature who eats others smile to live.
His scary smile keeps him awake and shows up in your dream.
If you find the disc it spawns and you will never live again.

If you like it be shure to command. I like writing. If you think I should make more of these or want to write something for you. You can always sen me a private message. I do interviews writing story`s and private skins.
So do what you want.

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11/01/2013 8:40 pm
Level 24 : Expert Mage
Unveszant67890
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Whew! Finally i can stop crying my tears out, that was creepy, brb gotta go to hospital
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11/01/2013 8:43 pm
Level 27 : Expert Artist
riverius
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Why did you cry?? Because of the story or that you need to go to the hospital?
(and going to the hospital is not scary?)
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10/30/2013 3:17 pm
Level 9 : Apprentice Unicorn
JenDan11
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This is pretty good :)
You still need to work on your gammar but this has potenial :)
You can only get better, good luck!
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