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"The Creeper," A Minecraft Poem by Plokey

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Hello, Internet. I am a poet who is a huge fan of video games, especially Minecraft. In honor of the famous game, I wrote a poem in honor of one of the most recognizable mobs - the creeper. Tell me what you think and if I should make more!

You walk through the night, with a pickaxe in hand
And you're practically glued to the screen
You turn to your right, to a flat patch of land
And you spot a tall creature of green
You run on in fear, but you hear a slight hiss
And grow tense, so still yet afraid
You shed a slight tear, at the items you miss
And the hole that the creeper had made
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04/07/2018 11:32 am
Level 5 : Apprentice Modder
LizzyA
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Awesome poem! I put it into a book in game; and you get a diamond.
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02/09/2014 7:41 am
Level 27 : Expert Taco
spike43884
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you realise, this is a sort of amazing poem, called a Limerick, nothing to do with the town of limerick in ireland, there funny short rhyming poems.
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02/09/2014 12:05 pm
Level 15 : Journeyman Miner
plokey
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Actually, this is not a limerick. A limerick usually contains five lines and follows a very precise rhyming pattern: AABBA. My poem contains eight lines and follows a different rhyming format. Thank you for your feedback, though.
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02/09/2014 3:20 am
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simonmcduck
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Really good poem, diamond to you.
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