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The Herobrine story part 2

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I was in shock... Not only was that thing staring at me, but he also held a golden axe that looked as if it had been enchanted. The glow of the ax illuminated his face slightly purple . It was him! When I was younger we would tell story's about him around a campfire. The legends that had been spread around told of a miner that was killed by a large chunk of gravel falling on him. Some thought it was a tragic misfortune... Others thought it was done by someone who wanted him out of the way.... No one knows if the story is true. If the story is true, then no one knows if he died by accident or on purpose. If it was on purpose, then we ALL know who killed him. His brother, Notch. Notch and his brother were supposedly very close when young, but had began to hate each other after fighting over there parents affections. They began to mine as much as possible, bringing in more, and more iron and coal from the mine. They were both fairly even until Notch's brother found a miracle.... Diamonds.... His parents began to ignore Notch and focus on his brother. They say that Notch killed his brother while he was mining out of jealousy. Notch inherited his fortune and lived a wealthy life. His brothers ghost still haunts the mines trying to kill any miner in his sight, but only one day every year. When I thought of this it hit me! No wonder no one was at the mine! It was that day today! I turned and ran for the water stream. If I could climb it and get to the minecart I would be home free. I was so close, but before I could reach it, a pile of gravel collapsed in my way. He was coming closer! I could see his soulless eyes coming towards me. I tried to run the other direction, but tripped on a block of dirt that was risen from the ground. He came over to me, raised his ax and brought it down on my head...

Steve's house: 6:00 am-

I woke up with a start, "What a dream" I thought. I needed to clear my thoughts... I went over to my cauldron in my bathroom. I started to wash my face. but then saw my reflection in the water... I tried to yell, but all that came out was a muffled enderman sound...

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Hi! This is the author again! Sorry it took so long to make part 2... If I get some more feedback, I'll be sure to get the next part out ASAP! Be sure to check out the first part, and my other blog, How to Avoid being a noob in minecraft.
I love encouragement and constructive criticism! Please no completely negative comments though! All flames will be used to enchant more axes for Herobrine to kill people with! Thanks, and be sure to review!
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07/05/2012 10:38 am
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....WOW....AWESOME!!!!!
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06/11/2012 2:43 pm
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