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The Orion: Rise- Part 5!

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Hey guys! I wrote this story, for some fun! Anyway, I'm planning of taking this to the next level, maybe get 50 pages out of it, maybe 100. I don't know. But if you can let me know what you think, if I should add anything etc. Anyway, I hope you like the story! <3

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The Orion: Rise- Part 5!
I flop myself down on top of my bed. It is soft, like a sheepo s wool. Back home I never had any beds as good as this. The sheets always had some type of bug inside, or had fluff on it. Suddenly I realise that that was a memory that I had in my old life. I strain my memory as I try to remember it. Something about bed sheets- Oh dammit! I hit my fist onto the side wall, making the bed shake. I was so close!!! Why did I have to forget again? I slapped my head, and rubbed my eyes. It was night, and I was trying to get to sleep. After Gary had shown me my bedroom, I had just shut down, and literally died. I didno t even have a chance to survey the room. But I did now. I glanced around the room. It was painted a dark green hue, like the leaves of an oak tree. There is a few torches hanging from a large chandelier that was hanging from the centre of the ceiling. There was a few bookshelves around the room, all packed to the brink with books. I sat up in my bed. I groaned and yawned as I stretched my aching back. It had been ages since I had had a good rest. Well, after yesterday morning that was. I wasno t too sure whether I got good sleep before that though. I scratched my back. It was itching from the fine linen. I got up. If I couldno t get to sleep, I might as well explore. I pulled on a new cotton shirt that Gary has supplied me with, than tiptoed out of the room, only with my pants and a shirt on.

I look around the corner. Nobody. I had learnt to be careful around this manor, where many people were staying. I had met many people, from short to tall, from rich to poor. It was quite funny though when a short man bumped into me as I was being directed towards my room. He started going off about how clumsy people were these days and kicked me in the knee. That wasno t funny. It resulted in me being glared at by Gary. Now, that main room where we were walking through was empty. I now realised just why Gary disliked me so much. This place was for rich people only. I picked up a hat left behind obviously by a woman. Or a man. I shuddered at that though. It was diamond encrusted and was probably worth a lot of money. I tiptoed back over to the chair Gary had been sitting in. Unlike the rest, the chair was old and worn out. Obviously why Gary sat in it, he wouldno t be allowed to sit in any others. I looked at one of the family emblems on the wall. It had two swords, each made of iron, crossing over each other. The tag underneath simply said- o In gemma omnipotenso .
o The gem almighty...o I whispered. I didno t know why, but it seemed that I understand what it said. I was disturbed by someone blundering in the darkness. I turned around. Something was crawling around on the floor, snuffling around.
o Bestia luporumo I whispered. The thing turned around, its glowing eyes studying me. I froze on the spot. It looked me up and down, studying my features and growling. We kept that stand off for several minutes, two species staring at each other, waiting for one to let go. I was frozen, I didno t know what the thing was. In the dark moonlight I could just make out ito s features. It was muscly and fury, like a wolf. But it stood up like a man, and had the power of an elephant. I figured that if this thing wanted to kill me, I wouldno t stand a chance. All of a sudden I couldno t help it any more. I let out a piercing scream, howling down the hallways, waking everyone up. The thing howled itself and charged at me. My natural instincts kicked in. I jumped up and grabbed one of the swords from the family emblem above me. I sidestepped as the thing raged past me, ito s claws outstretched. I jumped up onto one of the chairs, one of the fancy gem encrusted chairs. I would hate to scratch any of them, but I sliced a wide arc with my sword and cut through the fluffy chair. Fluff and feathers scattered everywhere. The beast growled, annoyed obviously by the fluffy chaos. It howled and slashed at the fluff, not able to see me through the screen. I realised that the beast couldno t see me through the clouds of fluff. It must have some type of special eyes that could only see straight forward, but not through small spaces. I could easily see it, but the thing couldno t. I heard shouting and footsteps thundering down the hallway. Someone screamed, another grunted in surprise. I knew that this was my time to act, but I couldno t. My brain wouldno t let be do anything. My body disagreed with that. I leapt through the floating mess and with the flat of my sword, hit the things head, causing it to scatter back in surprise. It howled, knowing it couldno t see me. Invisible, I leapt around the side of the beast, getting ready to destroy the creature. Too late, the thing swept its claws all around it, catching me in the arm. I howled and rolled over the nearest chair. The thing, now knowing where I was, growled in excitement and started slowly creeping towards me. I wanted to stay there, die under the wrath of this horrible creature. But I couldno t. Just as the beast was about to sweep down, and tear my insides out, I jumped up, leapt up the wall, and waited for the death of the beast. The time slowed down to match my style. I was flying through the air, towards the creature my sword above my head ready to kill and the beast still searching for me on the chair. I roared and sliced my sword into the creature, piercing its skin and spilling hot blood all over the floor. The beast, with a sword in its chest staggered and fell to the ground. The liquid of life circled the beast, trying to find a way to get back inside, but I knew that that wasno t possible. I looked back at the people gawping at me. Several of them, including Gary were staring at me in horror. Too late I realised my eyesight was going fuzzy, my eyes rolled back and I fell to the floor.


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Also, btw, this story is not totally finished.


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:D thanks. Love your suport! <3
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A.W.E.S.O.M.E.!!!!! DIAMOND
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I am lovin these! Do more please!
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I am. <3
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