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The Slime Story part 1

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Ok, this is my first story. i am still writing, and will probbably get commetns about how crap it is

Chapter 1

I opened my eyes. I was in a cave, near a small trickle of water. All I knew was that my name was Chaos. I was feeling a bit thirsty, so I squelched ove...

Squelch? That doesn't sound right! I moved a bit closer to the water, where it had flowed into a small dip. I saw myself, a small, blue-tinted, slimy blob. Slime... I felt that Slime was the type of creature I was, squelching through caves with our breathren.

Where are my brothers and sisters? They should be close by. I should go have a look.

I squelched off down the cave. On my way, I saw some interesting things. There was this glowing red stuff in he walls. I touched it, and it flashed, sending a small jolt down my arm. It ticked, so I laughed, and touched it again. I made it my point to touch any and every bit of it on my way down.

I also saw another creature, living in the caves like me. It had 8 red eyes, and scuttled past me, taking no notice of what I was doing. I tried to call out "Excuse me!", but he did not answer.

I reached a fork in the path. Should I go left, or should I go right? I looked down the right path, but there was nothing of interest, but down the left one, there seemed to be lots of the red stuff. That seemed a better way to go, so I took it.

I went further and further down, squelching all the way. I reached a dead end, and was instantly annoyed. I would have to go all the way back up, and...

I heard a noise coming from a dark corner, and turned around. ANOTHER SLIME! I was ecstatic! I jumped over to it, and stood still. While I was blue (or so I thought) it was a delicate pink. I reached out, as did it, and we touched...

...and I saw what was in his mind. He had come all this way, just to find me! I knew that he felt happy too, and we moved closer, and hugged each other. Suddenly, I felt the membranes of my body disolve, as did his. We kind of... fell into each other until we were one larger pink-blue mass of gelatinous slime. I stopped falling, and saw a flash. Suddenly, I felt... different. Then I realized it. We were sharing our thoughts!

It was true. Both our bodies and our minds had combined, and we had become bigger as well. I now found out that my sister's name was Wynryp (And, of course, that she was female)

I can't believe that he didn't know that I was a girl! It should be ovbious! Well, anyway, we should go find some other slimes and see if we can find out why we're here.

I agreed. We both jumped back up the tunnel. She had never seen the red stuff, having been in the tunnel since she appeared, so I showed her what it was and what it did. She was shocked at first, but hen laughed. She said that...

It felt really funny, like someone had hit her, but it didn't hurt. I was surprised that such a thing hadn't already been taken from the wall. We then heard a sound, and broke apart in fear. When we were apart, I still felt Chaos' mind, but not as much as before. We moved backwards until we were against the wall, right next to the red stuff.

It stood taller than both of us when we were combined, and walked on two legs. It went over to a patch of rock and hit it with a strange tool until it broke, then picked up the pieces. It looked over at the red stuff in the rock behind us, and grinned with glee. It then put something on the wall that lit up the area, which made us close our eyes for a second. When we opened them back up, it's expression was surprised, and it pulled out another tool, which was long and looked sharp.

It swung the tool at us, narrowly missing Chaos. We leaped sideways as it prepared for another swing, and quickly jumped downwards, further into the cave.

Too late did we realize our mistake. Down there was a dead end, and once we got cornered, the creature would kill us easily. We had nowhere to go. Or did we? "Wynryp! Were there any small holes down there?"

"I think there was, but I'm not sure" We kept jumping, but the creature was catching up. We reached the bottom, but I couldn't remember where it might be. "Where is it, where is it!", I whispered to myself, all the while as the creature was getting closer.

"There it is" Wynryp yelled, as she dived into a shadow. I followed her, trusting that she knew what she was doing. I didn't lad as I expected, rather, I didn't land at all. As I was falling, I heard a faint "Damn!" from above.
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01/26/2012 5:09 am
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Palaeos
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skimmed the story since im tired and about to go to sleep, used some pretty decent vocabulary and sentence structure from what i saw so i gave a diamond, i love people with good sentence structure
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01/26/2012 5:11 am
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superman11
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Cheers mate
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01/26/2012 2:57 am
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TeraFlameZ
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Nice story :)
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01/26/2012 3:03 am
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superman11
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thanks, i though it would be bad, but im writing chapter 2 right now :P
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