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The Story of DakoTraw #3

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DakoTraw's Avatar DakoTraw
Level 39 : Artisan Pixel Puncher
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Where we left off Dako was becoming the new hero of the town.

Dako needed some improvements to his suit. He still needed a way to get away from enemies of mass destruction. Wings, Boosters, Jetpack, almost anything travel wise came to mind. But he didn't know what to add. Dako was running low on metal an such too. But if he fought crime, and turned wanted criminals in, he could get the money he needs for supplies.
Dako then went on the rooftop of his apartment and watched the streets, and listened for screams. But all he could hear was cars. Suddenly he realized another thing he could add to his suit. A system in which he could pinpoint a weapon from miles away. But a noise broke his brainstorm. A cry for help on the street below!
Dako dropped down, with his no fall damage boots, and spotted out the victim. An old woman that was getting her purse stolen. Surprisingly the old woman put up a good fight with the mugger. She gave me time to get there. But when the mugger saw me, he ran the opposite direction.
I shot him in the foot with my laser and he fell to the ground instantly. I picked him up and put him against the wall. But a cop was walking by. He thought i was a Villain! The cop instantly pulled out his gun and had me at gunpoint.

To be continued...

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Kooljasper
05/30/2012 11:20 pm
Level 26 : Expert Narwhal
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Uhhhh... as you go further into the story you change persons. I mean this as in the fact that at first you're making a story about Dakotraw by saying dako did this dako did that. But then you start saying that you did this and you did that.

Writers checklist:
Are you the same person all through out the story [X] lol
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