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The town of the exe`s

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Hello, this is my VERY first thing posted EVER!
So don`t complain.

And I wrote this story because I was looking for a creepy crossover. I mean who wouldn't like that?(Really who?)

Once there was a kid named Steve, he was a dreamer that had the most craziest visions, but little did he know that some of those visions are the future. Steve had just visioned a town. The town was Blood red. He was about to take a step when the vision stopped, and what he saw was a forest.

  But this was not a vision, this was real. He walked through the crowded forest. Everywhere he could see was trees, more trees, and even more trees. Steve in anxiety yelled at the top of his voice to see if anyone was there. With surprise, a shout came back, but came in a very distorted state. All that he could make out was "OvEr HeRe"! Steve wondered who had made this mysterious voice. He then decided to see who, and slowly  creeped over to where he heard the voice.

And what he saw, was to him was creepy yet cool. It was a pixilated blood red portal. He decided to go in the portal, on the other side was the town he saw in his vision. " Oh my god!" steve said. Then the portal shut behind him. Then he saw a blur, a BLUE blur. It knocked him over and it kept going. "What was that?" he thought aloud. Then he looked at the town, but what he saw was not a town anymore. His eyes opened wide in shock, and then to his horror, he realized where he had ended up.

He was in his world.

Part 2: His heart started to race dangerously fast. Then he saw someone ,no SOMETHING run. It said "NO! KEEP AWAY!" Steve recognized it as tails. One of his favorite sonic characters. A single, glistening tear, fell down his cheek as he saw the monster getting ready to pounce on him, and then he was determined to stop this mosnster tortureing tails any longer. In fright and anxiety, he looked around for something to fight with. Untill he found a long, piece of shrapnel?

When he pulled the shrapnel from the ground, it made an eerie screetching noise, alerting Sonic.exe. The demonic hedgehog turned its head, litterally, 180 degreees around and saw that steve was in a position to strike with the piece of metal. He chuckled demonicaly and then yelled in a distorted way,"Do YoU rEaLlY tHiNk YoU cAn BeAt Me?" Steve had faught en with a sword alot before, with his brother, and of course they were just sticks so they imagined they were swords. So he just imagined it as a sword. Then something happened. The thing in his hasnds turned really HOT. It then formed into a blade that looked what was really similar to excalibur! "What the?" steve said. But there was no time for questions. He then rushed the monster without hesitation, runnin with speed and strength he did not know he had. He then drove the sword through the monsters chest. Steve thought he would just dissapear into black smoke like it had with tails when he was defending himself, but the exe let out a distorted gasp. It had actually pierced the demon!

Steve withdrew the sword from the etherial body only for it to slowly disintigrate into nothingness. Then Steve realized he forgot about tails. He turned around to expect a teary eyed fox, but instead a tree, no a forest. Then he saw a page nailed onto a tree.

part 3: "Whats this?" Steve said. He grabbed it and read it. it said "look behind you" At first he was confused. Then he felt he was in danger and was being watched. Then he remembered his sword he had so he was no longer afraid. He yelled "Hey! This isn't funny! Show yourself!" Then he turned around and saw a tall white man with no face and a suit. When he was about to grab Steve, Steve somehow did a back flip away. "How did I do that?" Steve thought, "probably like before" and then ran. He ran into something red and fell over. "Hey watch it kid!" it said. "ugh." steve groaned. He looked at the person that he had tripped over. It wasnt a person, it was non other than knuckles the echidna. "What the hell? How did you get here?" steve said.

"Well I was guarding the, wait why do I have to tell you?" Knuckles exclaimed. "you guys look sleepy. Hehehehehehehehhe. HAHAHAHA!" a voice from the forest laughed.

"Go to sleep" it said, and charged at them said. Steve braced himself, while Knuckles just scoffed. That is untill the man threw the knife at Steve, but then Steve dodged it, and then the knife flew towards knuckels. His eyes opened in horrer and the knife, pierced the echidnas heart. "KNUCKLES!" steve screamed. "this... this cant be." Knuckles said. And thus, he died. Steve was inraged at this man. and steve wondered how he did this, his vision went completely red and charged the man full on. The mans expression turned to horror as steve plunged the blood red sword through the mans heart. "Before i sleep forever.. i tell you.. my name.. i-is.. jeff..." jeff said. Steves eyes opened wide at what he had done. Steve remembered he had a friend name jeff. "Oh yes... goodbye... my old friend..." jeff said and died. steve had just lost two of his friends. Steves eyes turned blood red. and he knew slender was behind him.

And lets just say that the slender wished he had never came into existence.



The end

OR IS IT?????
CreditTo a soon to be reveiled story.
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08/07/2013 8:53 pm
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Peaceguy99
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.mov.exe

e-e
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08/08/2013 9:38 am
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minemanguy49
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whats mov.exe mean?
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08/08/2013 6:36 pm
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Peaceguy99
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*Shrugs*

Nothing means anything.

(As well as in the actual word mode, Not thing mode. e-e)
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07/29/2013 10:02 am
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minemanguy49
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updated!
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07/29/2013 8:06 am
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minemanguy49
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ooooh ok
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07/29/2013 8:05 am
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Seivelath
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You've decided to bring in slender I see. Just a tip, try to make these things less obvious, It makes for alot more of a cliffhanger, and makes people return
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07/29/2013 3:53 am
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Seivelath
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sonic.exe and minecraft crossover? And not bad. But here are some points that could help you a bit.

1. Try to use more descriptive language. A good example of this here...
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You wrote: And this was not a vision, this was real. He walked through the forest. Steve shouted "Is anyone out there?" There was a shout back, it was distorted all he could make out was "OvEr hERe!" Steve was confused yet curious. So he walked over to where the voice was.

I'd write: But this was not a vision, this was real. He walked through the crowded forest. Everywhere he looked, he could see trees, more trees, and even more trees. Steve in anxiety yelled at the top of his voice to see if anyone was there. With surprise, a shout came back, but came in a very distorted state. All that he could make out was "OvEr HeRe"! Steve wondered who had made this mysterious voice. He then decided to see who, and slowly creeped over to where he heard the voice.

2. A Bit more length. In my redo of one of your parts, It went quite a bit longer. Even if it's the same content with more detail making it bigger, it still is better.

But other than that, you should be right. I shall help you by giving you your first shiny blue rock, and as your new, that means diamond ;)
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07/29/2013 7:48 am
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minemanguy49
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Thanks
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07/29/2013 7:50 am
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Seivelath
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no problems. Always my pleasure to help out new ones :)
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07/29/2013 8:04 am
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minemanguy49
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i updated it to part 2
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