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The Vanishing

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Jeremy_D
Lvl 44Master Mage
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It all started on a night one so normal that you would expect nothing to be out of the ordinary. This tale of two brothers, Ken and Josh, out on a walk through a forest they went to as a kid. They would always climb the trees forcing their father to climb after them. The two brothers were walking along the designated path when they heard a noise that sounded like another person coming from a bush. They decided to check the strange noise out and the thing bolted and they soon followed.

They soon lost track of the strange creature as well as the path they strayed from. It started to get cold so they were going to head back but noticed they were lost. They thought if they kept wandering they would eventually find shelter. They soon saw what seemed to be the glimmering of a torch and they followed it. They kept walking towards the light and it kept moving further and further away. After following the light for what seemed like twenty minuets they found what seemed to be an abandoned mansion.

The two brother talked over about how they shouldn't go in when suddenly a loud screech reminiscing of the strange bush creature which made them without thinking run into the building for fear of their life. They run into the mansion hoping the creature isn't near and the doors of the building closed slowly as they walk in. They enter into a huge entrance with a stairway in the middle with a door on both sides of the staircase. The two decide to search around to see if they could find anything to eat. They then split up and search different rooms Ken takes the door on the right and Josh taking the left one.

Ken enters into the door on the right and was immediately greeted with a horrible chill making him feel like something inhuman was staring straight into his soul. He then ran out shut the door with his hand holding his heart like he nearly died. He decided to check out to go to the room that Josh went to and soon noticed that the other door with his brother in it had dissipated. He then started banging on the wall where the door had been trying to find out where his brother had been.

Then just like that Josh walked down from the staircase with a large amount of fresh food. As soon as he made it to the bottom step Ken gave him the tightest hug he had ever given anyone in his life. Then Josh with a confused face asked his brother why he looks so concerned. Then Ken replied that he thought he had dissipated and that the door to the left was no longer there. Josh then in a funny manor replied "Their was no door there Dave."

Then with that Ken with a horrid expression on his face slapped Josh. Then after that Josh started to do that screech that the bush creature was making. The creature then changed from looking like Ken's brother Josh to a somewhat demon like creature with horns and snake like fangs with gray wrinkly skin. Ken then forgetting about his brother ran out of the mansion with the creature still in agony from his agitated transformation to its true form. Ken got out of the mansion and looked back and the mansion was gone no where in site and the creature was gone with it.

He then got to a road looking for a car to get to the police station. He finally got to the police station telling them about the story. The police then tell Ken about a similar case three years ago with two brothers Jack and Dave. Then with that word Ken lost it and busted into tears remembering what that creature said. He then told the officers about what the creature said to him. The police then said they will investigate and that the last case with Jack and Dave was classified as a homicide and that he would be taken into questioning. With that Ken was taken by police and as they walked to the interrogation room he saw what seemed to be his brother Josh with a sinister smirk with snake fangs resembling the demon creature from the mansion.

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