One foggy day Mike (lonely school boy) was walking down the street to get home from school.After about 15 minutes of walking he gets home,but nobody is there.He tries to open the front door,but it's locked."Darn!" said Mike.He tried the back door but it was locked as well.Mike rolled his eyes,he could hear his dog Mack wining.He sees an old man,but when he ran over to him he vanished."Umm..." said Mike."AAAHHHHHHH!!!!!" said a voice behind Mike."WHAT THE HECK" Mike exclaimed.Someone grabbed his shoulder.Mike took out his pocket knife.He went in the back yard,only to find his dog mutilated and dead on the ground."Mack!!!" Mike said while crying.Mike saw a smile a nice looking smile.It looked like his mom's nice morning smile.The only problem was that IT WAS HIS MOMS SMILE.She was hung by a cord in a tree.Mike passed out.He woke up later...

-To Be Continued

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