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Feedback on my build.

camdogz2000 4/23/14 9:37 am
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4/24/2014 11:03 pm
Hello. I was hoping that I could get some opinions on my project. I am aware that the castle is unfinished inside, but please tell me things in the map that I can fix in the future.
http://www.planetminecraft.com/project/ ... d-2219717/
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Level 15 : Journeyman Pokémon
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Zoundrev
04/24/2014 11:03 pm
Level 34 : Artisan Artist
Work on some details. Castle walls in general are open to a lot of design. I would take the time and look up some real medieval castles and examine the architecture.
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Ekthon
04/24/2014 10:36 pm
Level 36 : Artisan Architect
Make your structures more organic. Add interest with each building, you can play with the other kinds of blocks mix them with others and see what happens. Also, besides using single rectangular forms use combined forms even curved forms, basically maintain variety.
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ASF
04/23/2014 7:40 pm
Level 71 : Legendary Pixel Painter
It looks too linear to me.
Maybe make some paths curved, and don't make box houses.
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OceansRythme
04/23/2014 7:39 pm
Level 8 : Apprentice Network
Try not to make your houses only one shape and put a roof over it. Use multiple shapes to give it a more interesting look
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Try adding some detail to your keep, perhaps windows on the towers or something
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Additions that you could possibly make to your town are trees, flowers, rocks, a path from your castle doors down the hill, etc.

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Don't be afraid to venture outside of your comfort zone, practice will only make you better Anyways great job ^^
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ClassyEnglishman
04/23/2014 7:20 pm
Level 33 : Artisan Dragonborn
If you need some help in creating castle walls with more detail , you can pm me
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camdogz2000
04/23/2014 7:17 pm
Level 15 : Journeyman Pokémon
Thanks for the feedback. I'll hopefully include that in my next update.
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Aethroz
04/23/2014 10:14 am
Level 25 : Expert Cowboy
Good start. I'd say maybe more variation on the outside of the castle.
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