Nikoshka
Hi, my name is Nikoshka and I must tell you now that I am not a builder, so don't expect something amazing from me. I need constructive criticism on my build because I am the co-owner of the server and I really think it is quite plain and if people could, then it would be great if people could come onto the server and help me improve the mines. Please, can you rate my build out of 10 and then tell me what is good about it (If there is anything good about it). If there is anything bad about it (If there is anything bad about it) and what I should do to improve it.
http://imgur.com/a/W0N5y
We also don't have many builders on our server so we do need lots more so if you do wish to become a builder on Pyrorealms then do apply here: pyrorealms-looking-for-builders-t545552.html
http://imgur.com/a/W0N5y
We also don't have many builders on our server so we do need lots more so if you do wish to become a builder on Pyrorealms then do apply here: pyrorealms-looking-for-builders-t545552.html
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Hi,
I understand you don't classify yourself as a Builder, nor do I. Though you're looking for some criticism, ey. Well, firstly the design is over used; I'd suggest varying more by maybe having a wooden design centring the wall. I say this because the design hurt my eyes slightly, having to focus on one design in multiple places.
Secondly, I suggest adding more wood in general - just to spruce things up slightly (no pun intended.)
And lastly, redesign the ceiling, or leave it open. Glass makes looking up trippy, so I recommend coming up with a new design, or opening it and having maybe the server logo above.
You asked for some criticism, so I gave it. Don't allow yourself to think I'm a bad person, I'm not.
I understand you don't classify yourself as a Builder, nor do I. Though you're looking for some criticism, ey. Well, firstly the design is over used; I'd suggest varying more by maybe having a wooden design centring the wall. I say this because the design hurt my eyes slightly, having to focus on one design in multiple places.
Secondly, I suggest adding more wood in general - just to spruce things up slightly (no pun intended.)
And lastly, redesign the ceiling, or leave it open. Glass makes looking up trippy, so I recommend coming up with a new design, or opening it and having maybe the server logo above.
You asked for some criticism, so I gave it. Don't allow yourself to think I'm a bad person, I'm not.
