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My second skin, has my skinning improved since last time

TheCrazyPanda's Avatar TheCrazyPanda8/10/13 6:24 am
8/14/2013 1:22 am
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Hi guys, last night I asked is my first skin good, and I made a second skin
I would like to ask has my skinning improved
please fill this in, thanks!


Shading Technique :
Originality :
Quality :
Overall :



Thanks
PS : Which is better? my second or first
First : http://www.planetminecraft.com/skin/my- ... n-2385896/
Second : http://www.planetminecraft.com/skin/girl-female-skin/
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basicbrick
08/14/2013 1:22 am
Level 49 : Master Pixel Painter
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Shading Technique : 0
Originality : 7
Quality : 1
Overall : 8
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BronzeOwl
08/12/2013 2:30 am
Level 2 : Apprentice Explorer
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Shading Technique : 0
Originality : 0
Quality : 4
Overall : 4
I'm sorry. The shading was kinda poor and I didn't see any originality. The quality was... Well, it looks like you just sorta put the most generic skins here.
I would suggest being more creative and looking up shading tutorials.
Try setting an alarm to go off every ten minutes and make a skin out of whatever you're looking at.
*BEEP BEEP BEEP or whatever your alarm is*
*is looking at a pineapple*
Make a fruit skin!
*alarm noises*
*is looking at a computer*
Make a skin that looks like the wiring and stuff from inside a computer!
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ElementalAndroid
08/12/2013 2:10 am
Level 38 : Artisan Robot
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Shading Technique : N/A (No shading)
Originality : 2 (Many of these around)
Quality : 3 (Needs more detail)
Overall : 3

You have improved! Great start!
Keep skinning and you'll get better
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fuckdom
08/10/2013 5:56 pm
Level 9 : Apprentice Farmer
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I like the first better than second
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Coolulises
08/10/2013 5:24 pm
Level 13 : Journeyman Miner
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Shading Technique :0
Originality :3
Quality :2
Overall :3

Shading Technique : I saw no shading, at all.
Originality : I wouldn't call it original, because a lot of "skinners" make a "teen skin"
Quality : Not the best, but I know you will get better, I suggest working on shading and have more "original" ideas. Use your imagination, its a magic place
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Teddy
08/10/2013 4:17 pm
Level 70 : Legendary Skinner
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Obviously you can see the skin isn't well..
It's not bad, but it's not great either. We don't expect a beautiful masterpiece from you because, of course, you're just beginning.

I will say that the layout and base colours of the newer skin are better than your old. If you're getting into female skins I would suggest that you bring the eyes up a bit more to at least fit in a mouth in or else you go down the road of 'generic girl skin #836'.

Hit me up if you need any tutorials to follow. I have a lot of links laying about from when I started skinning too.

You have good potential, don't give up.
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MayuriYandere
08/10/2013 4:09 pm
Level 58 : Grandmaster Prince
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Shading Technique : 0.1 (i would suggest getting a shading program here http://www.planetminecraft.com/mod/mcskin3d/ and reading some tutorials)
Originality : 3
Quality : 2
Overall : 5

again use MCSKIN3d as it is very good for skinning and read some tutorials. good luck! if you ever need any help feel free to PM me~
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MusaTheLegend
08/10/2013 3:59 pm
Level 56 : Grandmaster Necromancer
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Shading Technique : 0.5
Originality : 1
Quality : 2
Overall : 1

The shading.. what shading? You should shade the whole skin not only the edges.
Originality: Looks like every other "Girl" skin I see.
Quality: The shirt is alright, could use some shading and better colour picking.
Overall: Try Hue Shifting and shading a bit more.

Hue shifting: http://www.planetminecraft.com/blog/100 ... and-stuff/

Shading: http://www.planetminecraft.com/blog/a-s ... nfinished/
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Henry_Jekyll
08/10/2013 3:53 pm
Level 15 : Journeyman Blacksmith
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Hmmm....


Shading Technique : .5
Originality : .5
Quality : 1
Overall : .5
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anonpmc771545
08/10/2013 3:14 pm
Level 13 : Journeyman Miner
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Mgreat
08/10/2013 2:56 pm
Level 56 : Grandmaster Taco
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And...

Shading Technique : 1
Originality : 0.5
Quality : 2
Overall : 2.5

Again, I don't mean to be harsh, but this is definitely an improvement, but you could go a lot farther. Try looking at some tutorials and stuff, I'm sure it will help.
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Vital_D4N_
08/10/2013 8:52 am
Level 52 : Grandmaster Technomancer
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Try to imagine where the shadows would be and where the highlights would be and draw it in apropriately.
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TheCrazyPanda
08/10/2013 6:43 am
Level 12 : Journeyman Network
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Haha thats true I only shades the edges a tiny bit, Im currently working on 1 better than this with nicer colours, and also shaded
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World of Atlas
08/10/2013 7:50 am
Level 10 : Journeyman Network
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Good luck
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World of Atlas
08/10/2013 6:31 am
Level 10 : Journeyman Network
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Shading Technique : 0
Originality : 8
Quality : 7
Overall : 5
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