Feedback?

Hey! My name is ArgaJones, and I am looking to get some constructive criticism on my videos. I have been making videos for quite a while now, and I personally think I have improved a lot since I started. However, I am interested to hear what other people think I could improve on.

Here is a link to my channel page: https://www.youtube.com/ArgaJones

And here is a link to a video (in case you are too lazy to go to my channel page )
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WPzCzxRno64

Please let me know what you think (and even subscribe if you like what you see)

Thanks,
ArgaJones