Pack Tutorial - Feedback Needed!

Im looking for some feedback on my Resource pack tutorial, we are two new 18 year old British youtuber's and we do Minecraft videos/tutorials. Any sort of help on how to improve would be much appreciated.

Sorry if this is the wrong place but nevertheless Thank you

Anyway we hope this tutorial helped.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Wf5IcDNn ... yZRRwuTv0g