Looks pretty good. But to me it looks like you just threw in the player controller and added some models (great models by the way). Unless you custom coded the walking script and I'm pretty sure that the audio script as well.

Me again! More ideas for a great game!

This project has had lots of dedication already, but you should get a kick starter. Its helpful to get those extra funds for the game!

To make the game "challenging" You should add ways to die. Perhaps the player has to many jump scares, and finally gets taken out. Or maybe the bridge breaks, and you happen to fall off?

Also, The voices are to severe, They almost ruin the game. Maybe turn the volume down a bit? Or add more sounds to the loop. Its a bit to repetitive.

Thanks for reading.

omg pewds should play this

Looks amazing! Has that Slender-ish vibe. Just, ugh that voice. Are you planning to get it on Steam Greenlight soon?

Ok, I am reallllllyyy bad with scary games. But I might have to play it when it comes out. Looks awesome, keep wrkig on it

This looks amazing! I'd DEFINITELY play this!

( I also applied for the alpha testing, hoping to be accepted! )

I have a couple of ideas,

The Caverns are a bit to straight forward, You just follow one cave system. If you were to add 1 or 2 different routes, Maybe make a floor like a maze. That would also be good. You could also add textures for ores, or different types of stone. Maybe little rivets in the cave so it looks realistic.

Improving on my last idea, You could make the roof fall in on you at one point. Maybe even a way to end the game?

The falling is to artificial. To stop that, Make a falling animation. Maybe have a short cut scene for the first fall? Make the characters arms flail about on the screen. He could also drop the torch at the bottom, This would make for a perfect jump scare.
Another good jumpscare would be the player tripping on a large stone, and of course dropping the torch. So many possibilitys involving dropping the torch.

The game is not exactly... "Horror" yet. Jumpscares are great and all, But sometimes a REALY creepy atmosphere is better. Just leave the player waiting for a jumpscare, But it never comes.

If you want to put jumpscares in, A good way of doing them legit is putting a figure in the path. Maybe a dead body with a figure standing near it? Or you could just make the figure disappear into the mists. The playable teaser (PT) of the new silent hills is SCARY. It has hardly any jumpscares, One of my favourite parts was the radio telling you to "Turn Around". Once the player does turn around, there is nothing there. Methods like that ensure the player is allways on edge. Maybe add a realy old radio, With a disturbing sound on it. Thank you for reading.

Nicely done update.

Glad to see that the arm isn´t static anymore. Also that you could see the campfire from afar. The falling is still not natural except for the last fall so there is some improvement left.

Also I got the idea the whispering (children?) voices where more added. To much I think, it became a bit repetitive. Personally looking at the tunnels and such I do think some sounds of dripping water will work to, or some annoying bat sounds. Also the bats can be used for flying away along the player and break vision, for a sudden monster encounter or such? just a suggestion. The singing voice is well done, a bit creepy but good. I do wonder where it come from as it lasted over a long distance? Maybe a childish singing monster sneaking up to you from behind?

Ah well, as last I noticed at the end some support structures from wood, which I like. Maybe let here and there some stuff lying around from before, mining stuff, structure support, laterns and such. The halls are still quite empty.

I just updated the post to have 0.07 footage too! The new update!

*reads "You are not alone."* YAY! *reads "A monster is hunting you."* I'm out!

Not bad at all. The graphics looks good so far although the arm is a bit simple looking.
Besides I wouldn´t be able to keep my arm for so long at the same point. Try to make some movement in it that it isn´t static.

Also I noticed that there was a campfire. Only visible from a short range but wouldn´t a light source like that visible from far, far away?

I also agree with Reer123, the falls where from quite some heights for moving directly away.

Since it is made in unity, according towards the indiedb.com, will there also be a linux version of it?

As last, is this game inspired by amnesia?

Hey, I have recently updated this post, it now contains a new gameplay video of the latest version of the game! I'm also making this a post to keep you guys up to date with all of the latest news about the game!

Looks nice but I'd say you need to add in something to show that the character has taken a fall, when he jumped into the hole it looked very artificial and fake, also what is the game about? With the wooden planks there should be creaking noises and maybe a jump scare where a part of it falls away.

All together, it looks like a nice game.