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Lore Writing
Background into the Scourge:
Once a thriving kingdom, Karador now lies in ruin. Ages have passed while the scourge king, Ürbane the Black sits upon the Shattered Throne, commanding legions of undead to do his bidding. Karador was once the largest kingdom in Altheria, praised for its great king, Ürbane the Lightseeker. Many also knew the wise, noble man who went by the name of Irian, the High Magistrate. He was known for helping the weak and dying, nurturing them to full health, a fine man he was.
Everything in the city was fine, until the hired mercenary came to make Ürbane’s life vanish. The High Magistrate Irian watched as his beloved king’s throat was slit, and a man appeared from behind him, knife in hand. The assassin attempted to slip away, only to be caught by a guard, who quickly ended his life. Irian ran to Ürbane, holding his body in his arms.
Bells rung, crowds cried out as they received the news; their king had died. Irian would not stand for such a thing, he brought Ürbane to his chambers, and attempted a resurrection ritual. He thought he would bring life back into Ürbane, but what he received was much worse. His eyes had turned dead black, his face mangled, and his heart, rotten. Slowly, Ürbane sat up, and stared at Irian unblinkingly. Out of pure shock for seeing a supernatural being for the first time, Irian stuttered backwards, into the nearby wall. The resurrected king stood up, and walked over to the High Magistrate, and laid a single finger on Irian’s forehead. That was all it took to corrupt the High Magistrate to the point of insanity.
These two, demons, monsters, if you may, roamed the city, corrupting innocent people to what man now calls, the Scourge. Now in Karador, the Scourge are free to roam, while Irian creates more of the undead. They raid villages, feasting on the people who once inhabited the land. While Ürbane the Black has a much bigger plan, to corrupt every single race to the point of extinction.
So basically, this is for an RP server, describing Zombies and Skeletons.
Once a thriving kingdom, Karador now lies in ruin. Ages have passed while the scourge king, Ürbane the Black sits upon the Shattered Throne, commanding legions of undead to do his bidding. Karador was once the largest kingdom in Altheria, praised for its great king, Ürbane the Lightseeker. Many also knew the wise, noble man who went by the name of Irian, the High Magistrate. He was known for helping the weak and dying, nurturing them to full health, a fine man he was.
Everything in the city was fine, until the hired mercenary came to make Ürbane’s life vanish. The High Magistrate Irian watched as his beloved king’s throat was slit, and a man appeared from behind him, knife in hand. The assassin attempted to slip away, only to be caught by a guard, who quickly ended his life. Irian ran to Ürbane, holding his body in his arms.
Bells rung, crowds cried out as they received the news; their king had died. Irian would not stand for such a thing, he brought Ürbane to his chambers, and attempted a resurrection ritual. He thought he would bring life back into Ürbane, but what he received was much worse. His eyes had turned dead black, his face mangled, and his heart, rotten. Slowly, Ürbane sat up, and stared at Irian unblinkingly. Out of pure shock for seeing a supernatural being for the first time, Irian stuttered backwards, into the nearby wall. The resurrected king stood up, and walked over to the High Magistrate, and laid a single finger on Irian’s forehead. That was all it took to corrupt the High Magistrate to the point of insanity.
These two, demons, monsters, if you may, roamed the city, corrupting innocent people to what man now calls, the Scourge. Now in Karador, the Scourge are free to roam, while Irian creates more of the undead. They raid villages, feasting on the people who once inhabited the land. While Ürbane the Black has a much bigger plan, to corrupt every single race to the point of extinction.
So basically, this is for an RP server, describing Zombies and Skeletons.
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===== Kingdom server =====
======Storyline======
-VoidRavers
One day king Kassadin traveled with his army by foot to alot of places but then when they stepped on a pressure plate it was a trap! They all fell down into an empty space..... King Kassadin and his army got grabbed by a void monster named Vel'Koz... The monster slaughterd Kassadin's army and he couldnt do anything with tears in his eyes he watched how his army got slaughterd. Suddenly some dark powers came into his body he tried to fight Vel'Koz but he was too weak Vel'Koz threw Kassadin in the never ending void... But somehow there was a void child born people think he is the reincarnation of Kassadin his name is: teamminer. The child went to the normal world and made a portal to the hell(the nether) he walked and walked on the way he saw some blazes but he killed them.. When he came by a castle he found the Blaze king and fought him eventually teamminer killed the Blaze king and received a special blaze rod named: Empire Wand. This was the beginning of a new powerful kingdom!
- SoundRunners
SoundRunners were Vampires actually but their powers got taken away... except for their speed was as quick as the sound! This is how the story goes: There were some people who lived in a cave their lifes were not bad.... One day a demon showed up... Known as the Devil! He damned the caveman for no reason from now on they were stronger and faster then humans but.... They lived from blood! They hunted down children, women, man with no mercy God got so mad that he killed them all but there were 2 left from the Vampire species they got children but they were not stronger then humans and had no bloodlust the only thing they got was the speed. The vampires were not happy with the kid him and threw him into a river an hour later the vampires got killed by God... The child learned when he was 1 walking and when he was 2 running he ran faster then an adult when he was 2! He got older and older when he got 18 he learned to run as fast as the speed of sound also this was the beginning of a new and powerful kingdom!
-BloodSeekers
You might think that BloodSeekers are Vampires. Well they are the reversed version from a Vampire they are actually BloodMagicians so all of their spells are blood they kill with blood. They look like you they are everywhere maybe its your friend at school, your teacher, your sister, your brother, your father You will never know! Now you might ask how did they get those powers!? Well let me tell you the story: A few friends just hung around. They found a cave and went in there was a platform with a book on it one of them took it with hin and they went to their house to read it but they didnt know the one who reads it is the only one that will survive if you were less then 5 meters away from him you would die. So he read it and got blood in his hand he thought what is happening! Then his friends died cause all their blood got sucked out by the book and it got put in the guy's hand who read the book he cried and got very very angry he destroyed everything and everything what came by his path. This was also a beginning of a powerful kingdom
-Disguisers
These people dont really have a story its like humans they dont know how they even got on this planet, they were just people who were gifted with the powers to change into other things! No one has seen someone who changed into something else people believe that they are a legend but believe me they are not! So watch out maybe your pet is one of them!
-ElementalArchers
One day an archer went exploring the world he wanted freedom! So he traveled the world while his journey he sees an altar with a hole that is especially made to put your bow in so he put his bow in it he wondered what it was. He looked nothing happened and at night thunder came down to the altar.... Herobrine appeared! The archer took his bow and tried to kill Herobrine but Herobrine was very strong so the archer pushed im hinto a corner and shot an arrow right through Herobrines head. And then a magical powers flows into the hole where the bow was and the archer puts his bow back into it. Suddenly the bow disappeared and he was about to walk away and then the bow appeared again but now it was glowing! He took the bow and shot a creeper with it the creeper exploded not cause of himself but cause of the bow. Thats also a begin of a new powerful kingdom!
I got a better one
======Storyline======
-VoidRavers
One day king Kassadin traveled with his army by foot to alot of places but then when they stepped on a pressure plate it was a trap! They all fell down into an empty space..... King Kassadin and his army got grabbed by a void monster named Vel'Koz... The monster slaughterd Kassadin's army and he couldnt do anything with tears in his eyes he watched how his army got slaughterd. Suddenly some dark powers came into his body he tried to fight Vel'Koz but he was too weak Vel'Koz threw Kassadin in the never ending void... But somehow there was a void child born people think he is the reincarnation of Kassadin his name is: teamminer. The child went to the normal world and made a portal to the hell(the nether) he walked and walked on the way he saw some blazes but he killed them.. When he came by a castle he found the Blaze king and fought him eventually teamminer killed the Blaze king and received a special blaze rod named: Empire Wand. This was the beginning of a new powerful kingdom!
- SoundRunners
SoundRunners were Vampires actually but their powers got taken away... except for their speed was as quick as the sound! This is how the story goes: There were some people who lived in a cave their lifes were not bad.... One day a demon showed up... Known as the Devil! He damned the caveman for no reason from now on they were stronger and faster then humans but.... They lived from blood! They hunted down children, women, man with no mercy God got so mad that he killed them all but there were 2 left from the Vampire species they got children but they were not stronger then humans and had no bloodlust the only thing they got was the speed. The vampires were not happy with the kid him and threw him into a river an hour later the vampires got killed by God... The child learned when he was 1 walking and when he was 2 running he ran faster then an adult when he was 2! He got older and older when he got 18 he learned to run as fast as the speed of sound also this was the beginning of a new and powerful kingdom!
-BloodSeekers
You might think that BloodSeekers are Vampires. Well they are the reversed version from a Vampire they are actually BloodMagicians so all of their spells are blood they kill with blood. They look like you they are everywhere maybe its your friend at school, your teacher, your sister, your brother, your father You will never know! Now you might ask how did they get those powers!? Well let me tell you the story: A few friends just hung around. They found a cave and went in there was a platform with a book on it one of them took it with hin and they went to their house to read it but they didnt know the one who reads it is the only one that will survive if you were less then 5 meters away from him you would die. So he read it and got blood in his hand he thought what is happening! Then his friends died cause all their blood got sucked out by the book and it got put in the guy's hand who read the book he cried and got very very angry he destroyed everything and everything what came by his path. This was also a beginning of a powerful kingdom
-Disguisers
These people dont really have a story its like humans they dont know how they even got on this planet, they were just people who were gifted with the powers to change into other things! No one has seen someone who changed into something else people believe that they are a legend but believe me they are not! So watch out maybe your pet is one of them!
-ElementalArchers
One day an archer went exploring the world he wanted freedom! So he traveled the world while his journey he sees an altar with a hole that is especially made to put your bow in so he put his bow in it he wondered what it was. He looked nothing happened and at night thunder came down to the altar.... Herobrine appeared! The archer took his bow and tried to kill Herobrine but Herobrine was very strong so the archer pushed im hinto a corner and shot an arrow right through Herobrines head. And then a magical powers flows into the hole where the bow was and the archer puts his bow back into it. Suddenly the bow disappeared and he was about to walk away and then the bow appeared again but now it was glowing! He took the bow and shot a creeper with it the creeper exploded not cause of himself but cause of the bow. Thats also a begin of a new powerful kingdom!
I got a better one
Yeah, it's an awesome story, except you do need to add like more info on the land and characters, a bit of info on the assassin (Like was he sent by a nobleman, enemies, His treacherous son.) Is there a force trying to stop it, what?
Pretty good story, but here is some critic:
Very generic story. Basically "All was good, someone dies, corruption ensues, demons"
The "Scourge" makes it sound a lot like the Warcraft lore, in which the Scourge are also an undead race where the 2 "rulers" were also once a prince and a magician (Arthas and Kel'Thuzad)
Background information is needed. How did the king become "corrupted"? How did it work? And why? Too many questions are formed from that single storyline, although this may be because you haven't finished it, yes?
Just a couple points of critique you should consider.
Very generic story. Basically "All was good, someone dies, corruption ensues, demons"
The "Scourge" makes it sound a lot like the Warcraft lore, in which the Scourge are also an undead race where the 2 "rulers" were also once a prince and a magician (Arthas and Kel'Thuzad)
Background information is needed. How did the king become "corrupted"? How did it work? And why? Too many questions are formed from that single storyline, although this may be because you haven't finished it, yes?
Just a couple points of critique you should consider.
Aweome. i also Write lore, i wrote a collection of 10 books, Each with 5 stories detailing the background of another collection of stories I wrote.
