Ciberg
Alright, so I'm thinking of writing a small book/story. I'm going to post it here, 1 chapter at a time, and make a new chapter at least once a week. I need you guys' opinions on the story, and also I need suggestions on what to name it, and stuff to add to the plot. I will consider everyone's opinion, just make sure if you don't like it give reasons why and don't be rude.
Ch. 1: Introduction
Ch. 1: Introduction
Click to reveal
Sam was playing outside with his 7 year old sister Allie. They had recently moved into a small little town called Riverdale. It was summertime, and his parents had sent him and Allie outside to play. He was playing Hide & Seek with Allie so she would have something to do, and it was her turn to count. They were in a forest, it seemed like that was all there was in Riverdale. He found a tree with a little cave opening near it, so he decided to hide there. He climbed in and explored a little. It was a normal cave, a few spider webs and beetles on the ground but other than that, nothing special. He walked back a little and was surprised to find that there was a door. A door in a cave? How strange. It had a wooden sign on it, it looked old. "No entry!" He heard Allie shouting "Ready or not here I come!" and decided he'd explore the cave tomorrow. He walked over to the entrance of the cave and knelt down. After their game, as they were walking home they met someone that looked around Sam's age.
"Hi, I'm Matt," He said. "Nice to meet you, I'm Sam", Sam replied. They walked to his house together, and Sam found out that Matt lived in a house near them, and then Matt said he had to get home or his Mom would be mad. "Seeya tomorrow then?" Sam asked, "We can meet in those woods again".
Later that night after they unpacked the boxes and set-up his room, Sam lay in bed thinking about the cave, and the door. Anything could be behind it.
"Hi, I'm Matt," He said. "Nice to meet you, I'm Sam", Sam replied. They walked to his house together, and Sam found out that Matt lived in a house near them, and then Matt said he had to get home or his Mom would be mad. "Seeya tomorrow then?" Sam asked, "We can meet in those woods again".
Later that night after they unpacked the boxes and set-up his room, Sam lay in bed thinking about the cave, and the door. Anything could be behind it.
