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Critique on render
Hey, everyone, please critique my render that I created. I've quit for a year now and tried it out again. Also, I do not mind if you are a very picky judge. Thanks!
http://imgur.com/TJ0BhN8
http://imgur.com/hG0NY9X
http://imgur.com/TJ0BhN8
http://imgur.com/hG0NY9X
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Looks pretty high quality to me!
The first one is really good! The second one, has too much things- I thought the leaves were the guy's hair at first.
Thanks for the feedback! I don't mind if u have to be harsh, i actually appreciate it!
Okay, glad you didn't take that as an offense! Good luck with everything :)
Lorpie - The PieJoaoPauloC100Okay, okay. I don't mean to offend you, this is my feedback:
On the render itself: The body is twisting to the side in a weird pose, don't do that, it looks a bit weird. The double colors on the eyes look a bit too much. Try making one just slightly darker than the other. Another thing I dislike is the little lighting in the eyes (Don't know how to call that, but it's personal preference anyways). The extrusions on the head look kinda bad, use an angle of 91 degrees when extruding. Extruding the body and arms can be a good idea sometimes too.
Thumbnails are not a competition on who can add more effects. Calm down; that looks simply ugly. Lower down all the effects, and remove some. Also making the text the same color of one of the render's main color (in this case red) helps the overall thing look better.
Good luck
Wow! Joao where you been? :D <33
Lorpie! It's been a while mate!
Okay, okay. I don't mean to offend you, this is my feedback:
On the render itself: The body is twisting to the side in a weird pose, don't do that, it looks a bit weird. The double colors on the eyes look a bit too much. Try making one just slightly darker than the other. Another thing I dislike is the little lighting in the eyes (Don't know how to call that, but it's personal preference anyways). The extrusions on the head look kinda bad, use an angle of 91 degrees when extruding. Extruding the body and arms can be a good idea sometimes too.
Thumbnails are not a competition on who can add more effects. Calm down; that looks simply ugly. Lower down all the effects, and remove some. Also making the text the same color of one of the render's main color (in this case red) helps the overall thing look better.
Good luck
On the render itself: The body is twisting to the side in a weird pose, don't do that, it looks a bit weird. The double colors on the eyes look a bit too much. Try making one just slightly darker than the other. Another thing I dislike is the little lighting in the eyes (Don't know how to call that, but it's personal preference anyways). The extrusions on the head look kinda bad, use an angle of 91 degrees when extruding. Extruding the body and arms can be a good idea sometimes too.
Thumbnails are not a competition on who can add more effects. Calm down; that looks simply ugly. Lower down all the effects, and remove some. Also making the text the same color of one of the render's main color (in this case red) helps the overall thing look better.
Good luck
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i could never do smething like that.
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Better than anything I could do.
