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First Website | Needs Feedback

Stormversion2 8/6/15 4:30 pm
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8/9/2015 9:03 am
Hello,

I've been studying HTML, CSS, and JSQUERY for the past few days now and I felt confident enough to create a website. So, I did. But Now I'd like to see what you guys think about it, like it, love it, despise it, hate it. Just tell me what you think!
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SKiyoshi
08/09/2015 9:03 am
Level 29 : Expert Pixel Painter
From what I know, it looks pretty good. Imo though, I feel the package thing should be moved somewhere else. Having it in the bottom was odd for me.
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TheLukeGuy
08/09/2015 8:28 am
Level 36 : Artisan Geek
It's a template... But I like it!
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MinedroidServer
08/09/2015 8:26 am
Level 10 : Journeyman Miner
I'm an actual developer, and I know the guy who made this template.
Nice editing though. (not joking, nice)
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awesomecronin
08/09/2015 8:06 am
Level 52 : Grandmaster System
Looks nice!
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risha
08/09/2015 3:43 am
Level 23 : Expert Network
Looks like something made on weebly or the like to be honest.
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Butchah
08/09/2015 3:27 am
Level 1 : New Network
I like it! Maybe add some more colors instead of only black and white.
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Al CatSplat
08/09/2015 2:12 am
Level 22 : Expert Lumberjack
Looks professional, but I do agree it looks a bit like a template. Try adding more unique elements to it.
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Team
08/09/2015 1:35 am
Level 31 : Artisan Dragonborn
So I'm going to be giving my 100% honest advice.

The website is 99.9% a theme/template that you bought and downloaded. As I'm fine with that, the problem is, if selling sites, you can't be selling theme themes/templates, as it may bring you to a lot of trouble.

When I came to the site, I had no idea what it was, I read all of it and still didn't understand. I first thought it was something for Plug DJ and then I thought it was for Minecraft, then for both. Only when I saw the "Packages", I then realized it was server setup.

You wrote you just learned coding, so that might be a big problem when saying "I will sell you custom plugins". And by saying 1x custom plugin, I can ask you for the hardest plugin ever and you will have to make it.

Also having a contact us form that doesn't work, brings up it's a theme.

Sorry to be mean, just being honest to help you out.

-team
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deadrecon98
08/06/2015 9:44 pm
Level 38 : Artisan Programmer
You need to move some of the information into their own pages. For example the ranks section, that doesn't belong on the home page. The home page is just to give you insight into what the website is about, not give you all of the information about it.
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Civeberg
08/06/2015 6:31 pm
Level 29 : Expert Lumberjack
Looks like a generic first site, I've seen at least 5 people with their first sites looking extremely similar..

Looks good, I guess. Too much white space in my opinion

Also: Looking around more, your custom builds aren't too good, so unless you're gonna add a really talented builder to your team I'd drop the building part or just include a prebuilt spawn or something, or maybe combine with a build team that's cheap.
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Stormversion2
08/06/2015 9:37 pm
Level 3 : Apprentice Network
I'll work on toning the white down a bit. And the builds were really crappy shots and took mid-way though some projects. Since then we've teamed up with a few build teams and are working on pre-made servers, as it is easier to download a complete server than it is to buy components. Anyways, thanks for the feedback!
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Civeberg
08/06/2015 9:41 pm
Level 29 : Expert Lumberjack
No one wants to download a premade server though. Then it won't be custom
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Stormversion2
08/09/2015 1:13 am
Level 3 : Apprentice Network
It may not be fully custom depending on how many users get the Premade server but if you had a shell you could contact us to either replace some plugins or add some new ones.
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10Andrew
08/06/2015 6:22 pm
Level 42 : Master Nether Knight
At first when I clicked the link it took me to a blank page with nothing on it and I thought it was terrible. It was only when I tried to go back here to post that I then realised that I had lost internet connection and the website had not loaded right.

Anyway, now that I've seen it properly, it looks great. AND SOMEONE ON IT IS CALLED DREW!!!!! I instantly like the site now.
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Stormversion2
08/06/2015 9:34 pm
Level 3 : Apprentice Network
Indeed, my name is Drew.
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anonpmc1820037
08/06/2015 5:36 pm
Level 5 : Apprentice Miner
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Stormversion2
08/06/2015 9:34 pm
Level 3 : Apprentice Network
Indeed some of the code is copied for parts I did not understand well. The second image only shows the top because the height is messed up, when re-sizing it I did the wrong one, so that's why it's a bit off. Anyways, I'll work on the parts I do not know so well and definitely improve the image. Thanks for the feedback!
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Pixel
08/06/2015 5:04 pm
Level 43 : Master Mage
I've just spent 5 minutes typing up a reply but Cloudflare blocked it. To summarise, make the site look cleaner and don't mix a block colour theme with a high definition theme so much.
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Stormversion2
08/06/2015 9:30 pm
Level 3 : Apprentice Network
Okay, I will definitly work on making it look smoother and reducing the overall color. Thanks for the suggestion.
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Konrad
08/06/2015 4:56 pm
Level 16 : Journeyman Network
It's actually really good.
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Stormversion2
08/06/2015 9:27 pm
Level 3 : Apprentice Network
Thanks, although it can use somethings.
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