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no the story is longer then that. Its just one part of it and yes i know bad place to put this but it works.

Very short, has most of the aspects of the best books ever (rased by uncle and/or aunt) you probably shouldn't be posting that sort of stuff on planet minecraft, don't be surprised if they take it off. But, if that took you several years, wrighting probably isn't your thing. If you want to see what you shoulld put on planet Minecraft look at this http://www.planetminecraft.com/project/the-archer-wars/ .

-DJembrozio