I should probably go ahead and bookmark this before it ends... Also, voters, any kind of feedback/reasoning you have would be great. To me, 18 votes and 2 comments seems a little off.

Bump.

Both well written but in my opinion Chron's story is way too... idk... cheesy, parody-like, idk (My english isn't good enough to really describe my opinion)? Just not something I could get into really. So yeah, my vote goes to Zath.

My vote definitely goes to Chron for this one - both stories were written well don't get me wrong, but I've seen Zath's theme done numerous times before (the whole Jekyll and Hyde thing and that it was actually the narrator that did the killing). I loved the spin Chron put on the story and the subtle balance of humour and mystery worked a treat.

Also "Everyone, come quick! There's pre-configured elements everywhere!" has to be one of my favourite lines of all time.