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    Lukewonz
    • 12/31/2013 12:07 pm
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    This one is the best I read. Good work Koala .
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    Lukewonz
    • 12/31/2013 11:57 am
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    [ Warning ] This book is rated PG. Only for mature audiences. Rated PG for gore.

    Prologue

    James is in Cuba, fighting in WWIII. His unit is vying to take control of Fort Francenso. The fort is currently controlled by The Fatal Five: Germans, English, Italians, French, and Spanish. The Fatal Five’s goal is to avenge Hitler’s death by taking over the world.

    Fort Francenso

    “Duck!” shouts Aiden, who sees the snipers before I do. We barely take cover behind a rock before I hear the lethal bullets buzz over our helmets. Everybody sees Sergeant Fox fall to the ground, screaming for help, but nobody’s willing to go in range of the snipers again. We camp there for the night and in the morning, we see Fox, laying pale and dead, in a pool of scarlet blood. A soldier risks a look at the snipers, but they aren’t there anymore. Nobody waits for them to come back, as we run back the 7 miles we covered the day before to get into the safety of our home base. When we get back, we report to the General, and you can tell he’s disappointed in us. Then he appoints me as the new Sergeant, and I don’t think anybody approves. Even I think Aiden should be the Sergeant, not me.


    Raiding 101

    Six days after the sniper run in, the General steals food, money, and important military documents to sell to the TFF(The Fatal Five). All in union, we elect Aiden as the new General. His first order of business: To raid the TFF . We walk for days, dodging enemy patrols more and more as we get closer. Finally, we reach the fort, which looks like it came straight out of a 70’s war film, complete with rusted walls and broken windows. We approach slowly, as we know this could be vital to our survival. After clearing the walking patrols, we creep up on the back-door, because the front is too heavily guarded for a full-out attack. The defense looks like only two snipers, and the occasional walking guard.
    We run inside, and take out 2 guards. Then, we find a room full of chests. We open the chests, and find food,money, and best of all, pastries!Next, we run outside, where we camped before. We radio Aiden, and he comes back, only losing three men. We start our journey back to home base, satisfied with our work.

    Oversea troubles

    The president calls us, telling us that we’re to be moved overseas immediately, as TFF is sending more troops to the aid of Fort Francenso, which would overwhelm and destroy us, ultimately destroying the blockage of the use of the Panama Canal, the only water passage between the Americas. If we were eliminated, we would allow TFF to send reinforcements to the west side of America, forcing the United States and Canada under TFF conquest. So, we pack up and are out of Cuba in less than a day. We’re going to California, to help what’s left of the National Guard defend the West Coast from the advancing Japanese forces, who have already made a deal with Japan. If Japanese forces conquer North America, they can join the TFF. We all think it’s just a trick and after they kill us, they’ll just kill off Japan too.

    We meet up with the two other armies that were stationed in Cuba, The Loyal Troop, and The Gunmen. Our name is The Sharp Shooters. I quickly make friends with a man named Lewis, who was part of The Gunmen. We talk a lot, and share stories. Then we board the ship, a giant barge which was converted for National Guard usage. I go to my assigned cabin, and I soon learn that I share it with three other people! Their nam`es are Steve, Sam, and guess who! Lewis! Then we are called for lunch in the dining hall. We have gravy and turkey with buttered bread rolls. Next, we go back to our cabin and are told that we can go explore the ship and see where we’ll be living for the next two weeks. I go straight to the training grounds, to see what we’ll be doing for most of the time we’re here. It looks like a lot of Navy stuff to me, like swimming and grenade work. I see one man chucking grenades at an army of dummies, and another guy throwing life rings at some targets. Throwing grenades at an army of dummies sounds kind of fun, but the life ring stuff seems boring. Next, I go to the recreation room, which has a lot of pool and foosball tables, along with one or two poker stands. Finally, I head back to my cabin to get some shut-eye.

    I wake up the next morning to the eight-thirty bell, which I learned meant breakfast in thirty minutes. I get ready for the day, and head to breakfast. They’re serving blueberry muffins and some of the pastries we got from our raid. I also meet another man named Johnny, who supposedly is an Eskimo! The day flies by, along with the next three days. It’s Sunday, and we all get the day off. Some men go to the game room to bet off their salary, but i’m too smart to do that. Instead, I play poker with Lewis, Sam, and Steve, and we agree not to bet and we make a prize that the winner gets all of the dinner treats of the other players. I win most of the rounds, which entitles me to free dessert! The next week is long, hard, and tiring, but we finally land in what’s left of Miami.

    Copyright Luke W.

    And thats the first three chapters of my book .
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    Lukewonz
    • 12/31/2013 11:42 am
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    MagnemiteMaster
    flameanzer789Hello this is a place where you can post your stories, here is one of mine:
    Herobrine's attack
    One day in the peaceful village of Sniugnep, Steve was walking through the town when he saw something in the distance, another player, his eyes had no pupils and he was holding a glowing gold sword. Steve called out to this other player and the player charged at Steve with his sword raised ready to attack. Steve ran through the village into his house, he closed the door and blocked it off with some iron blocks. Steve ran up stairs and opened his chest. He grabbed out his iron sword and put on his diamond chestplate. Suddenly there was an explosion down stairs, Steve ran down to see that the other player broken into Steve's house. The player started setting Steve's house on fire and suddenly it was night. Steve ran to his window grabbed a brick from his chest, smashed the window and jumped out. He took three hearts of fall damage but kept on going. He decided to get help from a villager, so he ran to the mayor and asked who the other player was, the mayor replied;
    "Herobrine."
    Then suddenly the wall fell apart and Herobrine walked through, he slaughtered the mayor and then came for Steve, who was running out of the Mayor's house and to a tall building. Steve grabbed a ender pearl out of his pocket and threw it up to the roof of the tower, he landed and looked down to see Herobrine climbing a ladder on the side of the building. Steve stood up and walked to the centre of the roof and waited for Herobrine to approach. A few seconds later a lightningstorm began and Herobrine appeared, Steve stood there and waited for Herobrine to attack but Herobrine just stood there and pulled out a stick he pointed it at steve and then hit the ground with it, blocks went flying at Steve, he dodged and jumped and ducked, now there was a big hole in the roof. Herobrine leapt at Steve and swung his sword, Steve dodged and the sword hit his arm and it started bleeding. He ran to the edge of the building's roof and waited for the end. Herobrine grinned and charged at Steve with his sword raised, just before Herobrine swung Steve ducked and Herobrine tripped and fell of the side of the building. A few seconds later a bolt of lightning struck where Herobrine had fell. Steve had won the battled and went home.

    But there is one thing… Herobrine didnt die, he grabbed on to the ladder he had climbed up before and Herobrine lived, he will not die, not now, not ever.



    Here's my story!
    The Lengend of the Diamond Creeper!

    10000000000 eons ago, before any Players inhabited Minecraftia, Lived Creepers. Not just any creepers. Diamond Creepers! They were Creepers made of diamond! Their explosions could destroy an entire NPC village! By the way, there were only found in ravines. Near emerald ore! They still kinda exist, but they are more rare than finding a Shiny in the Pokemon games!
    I think you mean charged creepers right? They only appear when regular creepers are struck by lightning.
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    Lukewonz
    • 12/31/2013 11:30 am
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    Herobrine is a Joke . Nothing more.
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    Lukewonz
    • 12/31/2013 11:14 am
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    I found it via my brother, who's already Level 7. Im such a N00B
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    Lukewonz
    • 12/30/2013 11:47 am
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    Team Crafted 3d skin render photos(because everyone wants one)
    IGN:Lukewonz
    Expression:Jumping up in the air with a smile
    Right side color and items: Lapis blue
    Left side color and items: Diamond Blue
    Anything else?: Plz make the fedora better it looks really crappy. Also, can the lapis and diamond be like mixed together falling behind me? That would be best. P.S. It's so cool you're doing this thanks!
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    Lukewonz
    • 12/30/2013 11:41 am
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    Creepers are TERRIBLE!
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