Hey! That was actually quite good and not at all what I expected from a first video. I do have to day that the intro was slightly awkward, so you should probably think of one and stick to it.
Are you planning on playing any other games? Because your channel probably won't survive on Minecraft alone, even with mods. Not that you shouldn't play it, but diversifying would be a good idea.
Also, I know you're new, but good channel art and thumbnails go a long way to growing your channel.
Anyway, that's my two cents. Hopefully that helped.
