Your character application is Pending!
Most things in the application look to be fine! However, there are just a few minor details that build up into a few issues that should be taken care of. The first one is the passing of magic throughout the family line; magic isn't passed down through blood but is in fact entirely separate of blood in most instances. It isn't rare for aspects to be "locked" in place for a mage upon birth or for them to simply choose to pursue certain aspects however, but the only role blood plays in magic is the race and chance a child has to be born blessed with Bothimir's gift.
Another couple of issues are found in the magic system description and weak trinket example. It should be noted in the former that to cast magic, one requires either physical contact of whatever is being cast upon or sight, with alteration being the only one which requires only physical contact. For the latter, alteration cannot change the color of a fire. In such an instance, it would more likely change the color of the wax itself permanently.
Finally, more as an afterthought following the read; the Iregon bloodline and family would be rather low/middle class at best in the current climate of Saphriel, given the almost complete annihilation of noble families and their power before and during the Pact War. I say this because the biography gives a certain air of power or influence through knowledge, when in fact most historical text and informational tomes were lost to time before and during the war due to the Pact's burnings, pillaging, and other such destructions of record-keeping.
Please adjust and edit to care for these issues where fit, and give a poke to this thread once ready to be reviewed again!
