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    Zaredd
    04/28/2013 9:58 am
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    I host a voltz server for an international war but noone is really doing it except me and 2 teams
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    Zaredd
    04/11/2013 6:05 pm
    Level 5 : Apprentice Architect
    be sure to add me on skype for your order.
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    Zaredd
    02/25/2013 5:33 pm
    Level 5 : Apprentice Architect
    Bump, i will get round to doing all of these so keep the requests coming, just note im at school from 8am to 6pm. make sure you sub or i wont review your channel due to the rudeness that you expect something without giving anything.
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    Zaredd
    02/24/2013 3:56 pm
    Level 5 : Apprentice Architect
    Hey, im jared,
    post daily during school terms, take holidays off completly,
    Run 3 networks
    only got 850+ subs but heyho slowly growing,
    know a load of other gamers,
    and starting a series on Voltz soon, you could be a part in that if you wanted, theres like 12 people going to be in it,

    add me onskype: jared.wheatley

    channel: http://www.youtube.com/zaredddezigns
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    Zaredd
    02/23/2013 9:03 pm
    Level 5 : Apprentice Architect
    I will for a amount of money

    add me on skype @ jared.wheatley
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    Zaredd
    02/23/2013 8:58 pm
    Level 5 : Apprentice Architect
    any takers?
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    Zaredd
    02/23/2013 8:48 pm
    Level 5 : Apprentice Architect
    Daaparty
    Video quality 9/10
    record in hd, good fps, perfect, however, you use text that is basic and looks abit taccy. thats the only downpart.

    Mic quality 6/10
    you sound robotic, and noone likes that. this can be saved easily by purchasing a really good and cheap mic called the Microsoft lifechat LX-3000.

    Commentating voice 6/10
    Your voice sounds monotone and a higher pitch that could easily piss people off, i would make a concious effort to make your voice varie pitch from low to high to everywhere.

    Channel presentation:
    you have custom graphics however they are hard to see and read, i would invest in some clean, professional graphics. i offer these services and you can contact me via Skype at jared.wheatley

    Video descriptions:
    Good however no links to socialmedia and other places such as affiliates. use tags to advertise content.

    Overall 6/10
    Upload more. thats all i can say, you havent uploaded in a month and that wont get you anywhere.
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    Zaredd
    02/23/2013 8:27 pm
    Level 5 : Apprentice Architect
    The Mega Game Zone HD
    Video quality 10/10
    Perfect, no lag 720hp video. only thing i could say is higher quality texture pack.

    Mic quality 10/10:
    You use my mic! it is perfectly audible. congrats

    Commentating voice 6/10
    Your voice is perfectly clear however it is very sloooww, this leads for more boring commentaries, i would suggest picking up the pace and sounding more enthusiastic.

    Channel presentation 6/10:
    You have a custom logo, however it isnt clear at all. you have no custom background. i would consider buying some graphics from a graphics artist, i personally do graphic and you can contact me on skype at jared.wheatley for cheap, quality graphics.

    Video description 7/10:
    its very detailed however there are no links, to your channel, to affiliates, or to social networks.

    overall 7/10:
    your videos are of amazing quality however you need to present your channel better, and improve your commentating techniques. i would strongly suggest adding me on skype about your graphics at jared.wheatley, and when you have all that sorted look for a directorship on a network.
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    Zaredd
    02/23/2013 8:19 pm
    Level 5 : Apprentice Architect
    add me on skype, im looking for a team for a massive tekkit series. jared.wheatley
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    Zaredd
    02/23/2013 2:24 pm
    Level 5 : Apprentice Architect
    Krazy Froggable:
    Video quality 9/10:
    Your FPS is fine and you record in hd, perfect, however there are some technical hitches at times and the texture pack i know isnt finished but doesnt look that pretty. i would suggest using another for timebieng or just hurry up and make it

    Mic Quality 7/10:
    Audible however isnt as clear as would be nice. again i would suggest Microsoft's Lifechat LX-3000.

    Commentating voice 8/10:
    Your voice is of a good pitch, clear and pretty smooth on the ears, i would suggest however sounding more happy as it sounds a tadge depressing i don't know wether your bored or tired but sound like your having fun and your viewers will have fun.

    Channel presentation 7/10:
    you have a background, wether its custom or not i dont know as it doesnt relate to your channel in anyway, however it is quite basic which isnt bad but could be improved on, seek out a GFX artist. you also dont have a good intro as i saw, you could hire a intro maker, again i mae graphics and intros, you can see my intro a http://www.youtube.com/zaredddezigns .

    Video Description 5/10:
    Not very imformative, and doesnt lead viewers on to want to watch the video. you do link to social media which is good, but like i said add more information.

    Overall 8/10:
    good video and mic quality overall, along with potential in your voice, your channels presentation and description is what let you down, seek out advertisements, a directorship on a network could help you grow massively.
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    Zaredd
    02/23/2013 2:02 pm
    Level 5 : Apprentice Architect
    Jacob_H_Games
    Video Quality: 9/10
    You record in true hd, which is a necessity nowadays, FPS seems fine so that's all good. only thing is in the last minecraft episode it was only 480p, thats the only thing taking you off a 10.

    Mic Quality 8/10:
    You mic is audible, however is abit fuzzy and could be more crisp and clear, again i suggest using the Microsoft LX-3000 as its what i use and is very cheap, syndicate project used it when he started.

    Commentating Voice 9/10:
    You voice is clear, enthusiastic and good to listen to, however there is nothing that defines it, i would suggest starting to build up a sort of quote base that people ill know you from, i.e Syndicates "Housekeeping" or Simon from the yogscasts "aahhhh!" you know what i mean.

    Channel presentation 4/10:
    You have no custom background, just a color, i suggest spending a couple of dollars/pounds on just hiring a GFX artist to make you, personally i do Graphics and you can add me at jared.wheatley on skype. you also have a ver pixelated logo that isnt very advanced, and no set intro. this can vastly improve your audiences viewing experience. you should als make it so that a video auto plays when someone visits your channel.

    Video description 8/10:
    Imformative however doesnt lead people on, you have the exact same situation as the people above, that you dont set a mysterious description that makes the viewers wonder hat happens within the video, making them watch it.

    Overall 6/10 Good videos, however bad presentation of channel, i would MASSIVELY suggest hiring a GFX artist, and then advertising on forums, and even look for a directorship on a network. again i do Graphics and know alot of amazing artists so if thats something you would consider add me on skype at jared.wheatley
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    Zaredd
    02/23/2013 11:57 am
    Level 5 : Apprentice Architect
    ramblinghaggis84:

    Video Quality: 9/10
    Quality is fine, you record in hd, only thing to note is that at time there is FPS lag,this can be sorted my downloading optifine, or my upgrading hardware such as ram or graphics card.

    Mic Quality: 7/10
    Your Mic quality is Audible however it isnt as clear as people may like, i would suggest spending about 20 pound on a "Microsoft lifechat LX-3000" it is extremely good for the price.

    Commentating Voices 8/10:
    In your partnership you have 2 people:
    Clear voice however he does lack enthusiasm when playing, this doesnt mean go out there like hyper toddlers however you might want to sound like your enjoying the games. (Both of you)

    Presentation of channel (Colors, background, logo):
    You have custom backgrounds and that however they arent as clear and advanced as they could be, however overall your channel is presented well, apart from the channel title. people like a title that stands out, which you have however that title doesnt make you want to see what videos you create

    Video Description 6/10:
    You give updates within your descriptions, which is good however i would suggest adding more things like a sentence that makes the viewer think "i wonder what that could be" for instance the yogscast, they have descriptions that include things like:
    "SIps and Sjin test explosives that eventually has massive consquesnces for everyone!" that makes me think ooh i want to see that, so i watch it.

    Overall 7/10
    This channel is good, the fact that it has a girl is a bonus within youtube, and you should definetly advertise it a bit more throughout forums to get a larger audience as your videos aren't bad.
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    Zaredd
    02/22/2013 6:37 pm
    Level 5 : Apprentice Architect
    If anyone comes just shout hey Zaredd in the chat unfortunetly im in a faction by myself cause i prefer it but there are tons of factions you can join
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    Zaredd
    02/22/2013 5:13 pm
    Level 5 : Apprentice Architect
    Could you please review my channel back? http://www.youtube.com/zaredddezigns and i think that the point the first reviewer made about the music is correct
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    Zaredd
    02/22/2013 5:12 pm
    Level 5 : Apprentice Architect
    i have someone with 170k, someone with 130k, 100k, 90k, 60, about 4 50k's and from there a shit ton of the others. http://www.youtube.com/zaredddezigns
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    Zaredd
    02/22/2013 1:44 pm
    Level 5 : Apprentice Architect
    Hey man, i cant think on what to ugrade my channel with so ill give you a shot,

    http://www.youtube.com/zaredddezigns

    i could possibly get you a fair bit of exposure seeing as i run 2 networks.
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    Zaredd
    02/22/2013 1:42 pm
    Level 5 : Apprentice Architect
    I dont think i would benefit from bieng your partner however you are in need of a decent background, if you want to add me on skype at jared.wheatley i would be happy to quote you one up.
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    Zaredd
    02/22/2013 1:39 pm
    Level 5 : Apprentice Architect
    Right mate im a commentator sjust as you and i use the headset syndicate used to use, its abotu 22 pound (under 30 euros) and its the Microsoft lx-3000, the thing is out of this world:) you can hear quality from my videos @ http://www.youtube.com/zaredddezigns
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    Zaredd
    02/09/2013 9:26 am
    Level 5 : Apprentice Architect
    Could you review mine? http://www.youtube.com/zaredddezigns ? i have loads of different kinds of videos, a minecraft series, skyrim, allsorts
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    Zaredd
    02/09/2013 9:22 am
    Level 5 : Apprentice Architect
    Comment on the video
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